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| Emmy Scribe Protra 2007-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseThis was so very nice and awesome. |
| Sorachiro 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story, the ending was so beatiful. I think you did a great job capturing Usopp. He really is a hard character to write, cuz he's such a deep character. Some people might laugh at that, but really, he is. x3 |
| Fishheads 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseWere in the same boat. Wanna know why? ITS 3:AM IN THE FREAKING MORNING! |
| Hebi R. 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseNot horrible at all. Great, in fact. I never really liked Usop, but I think I'll give him another chance now. |
| Lina Darkstar 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseA win! A non-deathfic of the best kind. Usopp is captured perfectly, and he's one of those who's hard to pin down under the best of circumstances. Much less when he's fighting with the author. Great job. |
| pitupaso 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abusesque omg the ENDING!! XDD *bounces around madly* omg. I'm totally fangirling here right now. You wrote this really well, it's so believable, even though I hate, hate, HATE deathfics with a passion, it made me want to cry. I love how Usopp's thoughts run together, and then the part where Chopper managed to stem the bleeding and everyone starts talking about each other, and then Usopp just goes "Liars" OMG *FANGIRL MODE ON* SO COOL. I SOUND LIKE CHOPPER NOW. But omg squee. I love how you wrote this. I love the fact that I can picture everydamnword just -happening-. XD Awesome. |
| Saiyako 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful, KuroKame... You have a really great sense of the way Usopp thinks, and of his relationships with his nakama. I especially love the way they started telling each other's stories as if they'd just made them up - it's a beautiful way to honour him. *sigh* This really would have made a great deathfic, but then we all know the Straw-hats are all too stubborn to die. *grin* |
| Omni-chan 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuse*sniffles* Aw Usopp is strong afterall! |
| Akuun Ato 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's so well written and thought out. |
| Digitaldreamer 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuse*claps* That was absolutely wonderful! You nailed all of the characters perfectly. ^^ I especially love how everyone told "lies" at the end, that was absolutely adorable. |
| Hydra-Star 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuse*Is in love* Can I marry you? (Not really) I love this fic! Usopp is so well brought out. And the ending was superb. There are far to few Usopp fics out there. I'm so glade that such a good one has been added to that short list. Very good job. You should be proud of this. |
| hamstertai 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story is soo cool, very dramatic very Usopp sniff... so beautiful ( wipes tear ) |
| karaleyn 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseUsopp-fic! i love Usopp ^^ you know what part i loved in this? toward the end, when they started saying those things about each other. i've always thought about how Usopp would go back and tell grand stories about the places he's really been, but hearing their characters cut down to just a sentence or two is awesome because it emphasizes just how crazy they really are! like, obviously Sanji is really strong, but i loved what she said about the boulders, because it sounds like such a lie even though it's not. i thought that was cool ^_^ and the last line is really cute *laugh* |
| Comix28 2005-05-02 ch 1, | abuseAww, this was a really beautiful written fic. I think you got into Usopp's psyche really well. ^_^ I could see him thinking like that and I think you did a great job! |