Please don't give up on your stor!I really like it.

Oh it was pretty good but its action/adventure/romance hello no romance

I really love this story! Please update soon!

OK, I really like this story, and I like that you added in your own bending abilities. So I just have one question. Why did you stop writing this story? I assume that you haven't been working on it since you haven't updated for months, but it really is a great story, and I would like to see an end to it. I just discovered this story, and I'm really curious as to how it ends. And the only person who can tell me how it ends is you. So would you pretty please finish this?

Preaty good,but when does Jasmine come in? The sequil?
I did like it though. *

You are keeping Zuko in Character, but I didn't think he would hurt a girl...I suppose he wouldn't have thought she would've fought him...and I suppose he was realy mad...hm well, you 've given me somthing the ponder... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Please update soon!! Its a really good story!! I thought Leiya was gonna cry! Poor her!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON.

I really like this story!! I've read this story over a few time but never reviewed!! :-) Keep it up!!

Please update soon! ^^

I think your story has five stars

erm...kool. so...they're not in the hospital yet. okay...well...I have to say that I liked the first version better though. but its kool I guess...

is this axk?

AMAZING STORY! please up date soon! im going mad waiting!

Hey there! Sadira here. I hope you're doing well. I just read hte next part of your story. I hope you write more soon. I hope Lila is okay and also that Katara is all right. Please update asap!
May the power of water be with you always
Sadira

"a little boring"? are you crazy? that was the best chapter in my opinion. pretty strong too. loved it! ^^ good job. plz update just as soon! ^^
-Miya