Ahahahaha, Eddy actin like a mobster! Lmao!

Ahahahahaha, Chef Kazuya. Is it possible that Kazuya's really that dumb? Ahahahaha, what a joker! Can't imagine Kazuya being a...a s-stipper though...he doesn't have the face for it O_O but maybe his bod would be enough, hahahaha. But he's gettin old anyway, heh heh...well, cool chappy anyway!

Cheddar Burger? Haha, awesome. Ah, poor, poor Steve - though it serves him right cuz I find it real hard to beat him in Dark Resurrection, heh heh...now that's just petty :\
Well, on constructive criticism, you might wanna re-read the stuff you wrote and then see if everything makes sense. I mean, it was all pretty cohesive an stuff but the grammar leaves something to be desired and the dialogue's a bit off sometimes but...other than that, I thought it was cool :D

hey love ya story plz can you write a sequel to dude wheres my car?? i loved it!!

Awesome story. I laughed, I cried...well I didn't cry...but it was funny.

i read this because erikaTEKKENfan told me about your (cool) stories. This is cool!

I loved your story! It had everything. Good Job Cute ending!

about chapter twelve, i know the poem, about linkin park eh?

Aww, it's was cute! I just feel sory for Steve...
Anyway i liked this story because i loved the couples and it was funny all the way until the end.

congratulations...too bad it's over so soon ;.;
take care ^.^

Well... Thanks for reviewing my fic. and for the information of all.. hehehehehe... I'm a girl. Nice story by the way. Me likey

Aww, so swet! Can't believe it's over! But awesome story though and a great way to end it back at chedder burger. lol.

Oh, and as for a Julia/Hwoarang comment... hmm... Well, that couple's cool too or else I wouldn't be reading your story! Then again you got a lotta good humor in this fic so even non Julia/Hwoa, Xiaoyin readers would love this story! But what's commonly most appealing about the Julia/Hwoa is that they're so opposite and you know how people love that whole opposites attract thing... ^_^

lol thats a really micky story bro!
liked the part where red asks jin if jail was any good! HA...CRACK ME UP

Peace Out People

AAW... HOW SAD!
oh but i laughed at hwoarang wen he gt rejected! ah guts for him!

WOW! Such a sweet ending! Make a sequel please! I can't believe you didn't reunited Xiao and Jin. You should have! That would have been the perfect ending! Anywho, can't wait until your new story! Bye!

Aww so sad, it made me cry, i really like your story and can't wait for your new story. Bye