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| AeonFrodo 2007-05-08 ch 21, | abuseM. It does seem you have no idea what you are doing to be quite honest. Maybe you should write a story plan? Your writing is nice though. Please continue. |
| chocolatelover1 2007-02-05 ch 21, | abuseAh!! Km lost!! Eathed this is confusing or i just stupid!! Well, eather way, its a good chapter! |
| Twin Tails Speed 2007-02-04 ch 21, | abuseI can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| Angel-Mary 2007-01-31 ch 20, | abuseHello, this is the author, Thank you Mel, for your recent review. I've been stalling an upadate so far because I am not sure where I am going with this plot. Although I do know the ending. It is the means that justify the ends that I'm in the process of figuring out. A part of me would like to start from the seventh chapter all over again, but that would not be fair to my fans/readers. Or even fair to myself. I am trying to remain on task and stick to the plot. For all of those who are reading this, please bare with me and know that I will finish the story. An update will be posted by this Saturday. Know that I want to know what is wrong or what I can try to make better with this story, this plot, the characters. Sincerly, Angel_Mary |
| mel 2007-01-30 ch 8, anon. | abuseinteresting plot that you have. Nice story structure too. However, it seems that as your story progress, it become less and less attuned to your plot. You seem to have lost your focus on the main character, Taichi, which makes it less appealing to the fans of the series. |
| AeonFrodo 2006-10-25 ch 20, | abuseOk... interesting... Please update soon! |
| Angel Born of Darkness 2006-10-17 ch 20, | abuseur mean cliff hangers suck |
| chocolatelover1 2006-10-15 ch 20, | abuseYay! you finally Updated!! Okay...I admit it... Im confused... Oh well! Still a good chapter!! |
| Twin Tails Speed 2006-10-14 ch 20, | abuseThis is a excellent and very interesting chapter update. |
| Angel Born of Darkness 2006-09-21 ch 19, | abusethat was kinda weird but watev |
| Angel Born of Darkness 2006-09-21 ch 18, | abuseholy ** |
| Twin Tails Speed 2006-09-11 ch 19, | abuseThis is quite interesting. |
| AeonFrodo 2006-09-05 ch 19, | abuseWow, good chapters. AND SORA IS FINALLY IN THE FIC! HUZZAH! Sorry, she's my favourite character from Digimon. Please update soon. |
| chocolatelover1 2006-08-11 ch 19, | abuseOh, so thats how they got the message to meet them at the airport! I was wondering about that... Well, great chapter, please hurry with the next one! |
| AeonFrodo 2006-06-28 ch 17, | abuseWow, this is getting really interesting. Please update soon. |