Reviews for The Hunter and The Prey

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Anon. 2008-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseYay "Bleeding Love"
AZ 2008-07-24 ch 24, anon.	abuseAmazing. That was a really great story. I can't even sleep anymore. Mostly because Katara dies! That really bugs me though. This story makes me feel sad, but at least it was very well written. Please write an alternate HAPPY ending! Then I can sleep in peace.
renjiluver44 2008-07-20 ch 24,	abuse;pved it!
TryxterWolfe 2008-06-26 ch 24,	abuseI just have to say... I love you. I have NEVER read a story like this before. Though, sadly enough, I found Love Thy Enemy before this one, so I kinda could tell what was going to happen in the end. But even though, I sat here, on my laptop, completely taken by the story into this world you created. It's two in the morning, and I read this whole blessed thing from start to finish (thought pausing for a moment around Chapter 13 to get a bowl of ice cream). I must say, the relationship between Zuko and Katara wasn't how I envisioned it, because I could never see any way that they could really be together unless one of them changed COMPLETELY. You mixed them in a way that fits them. Zuko as a loving, abusive jerk who would be jealous and angry all the time, but also have his good sides you can't help but love. Katara, always loving, snarky and a ** when needed, but also the motherly girl who takes care of everyone no matter who they are or what they've done. The writing style is magnificent, better than any I have seen in a while. This story was the best read I've had ever since I first joined this site. Plus, I LOVE the author's notes, lol. I don't know what else to say... but that this has been as great to me as any other book irl that would catch my intrest. Your story was right-on. :) Very well done. ~Tryxter
PrayerGirl 2008-06-19 ch 24,	abuseI actually read Love thy enemy first and when you had stopped posting chapters I went to your profile and found this story. The transitions you made and comparisons you made were and are very good. The ending was REALLY SAD! You do good with messed up endings! ^o^ ps. Please answer my question that I sent you on your profile.
PrayerGirl 2008-06-19 ch 23,	abuseWow...
PrayerGirl 2008-06-19 ch 21,	abuseTears welled up in my eyes when i read the part about Kaz leaving his family. Good job and wonderful job with the cabbage man! ^o^
PrayerGirl 2008-06-19 ch 20,	abuseI like how the son and father told Zuko. That was a funny part! ^o^
PrayerGirl 2008-06-18 ch 18,	abuseI love the letter and the translating part that was cute!
PrayerGirl 2008-06-17 ch 17,	abuseThe dream you gave Katara, it's... just... CRULE! Great story though! ^o^
PrayerGirl 2008-06-17 ch 16,	abuseYEAH! I LOVE FLUFF! YOU DO GOD AT FLUFF! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ^o^
AmicableAlien 2008-06-17 ch 24,	abuseI feel like KILLING YOU and CRYING and the same moment! The same bloody moment! Zuko! You two-faced son of a dog! I hate your guts for now but yadda. You made me want to cry - for fictional characters. I do not cry at fictional characters. The last time I cried for them was in Balto and that was because i was in a peculiarly delicate emotional state. I started out reading this story, thinking, oh, well... I've read the sequel and adored it so may as well tunr back and see this one, ho-hum... And I admit it was good (notas good as the sequel) for the first few chapters. Then it got darker... And darker.. .and more and more absorbing... Until I was nearly skipping entire chapters, desperate to read the end. I didn't though. The chapters were too good. And then the ending! The ending! How could he! The twisted psychotic son-of-a-!?!?! And she loved him! Anyway, needless to say, wonderful story that was like a fine wine - it improved as you went on. The epilogue was amazing - adult, refective and oh, so, so sad... Knowing how Zuko turned out I feel almost sorry for him now, But still. Wonderful story. That is what I have been trying to tell you in my blabbering way with words. Wonderful, wonderful story. And kudos on being so good at turning out chapters so fast. I wish I had that gift. AmicableAlien PS Wonderful story - Again.
Zita* 2008-06-16 ch 20, anon.	abuseIm on Chapter 20, What A Tangled Web We Weave? my q: if Kaz's dad died when he was nine, and hes now 12, how is his SINGLE mother having a bay? Curiouser and curiouser as Alice would say. (that my line, no stealing!!)PLEASE E-MAIL ME BACK!! Ciao! Z*
pinprickofhope 2008-06-08 ch 24,	abuseeven though it had a very sad ending and some very dark moments it was still real and very beautiful. good job...
PrayerGirl 2008-06-06 ch 12,	abuseCool!

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