Well done!

Goddess Anjanee :)

Wow. That was really awesome.

Very good. A thoughtful consideration of the aftermath of 'Hunter's Moon'.

nice

That was great, simply great! Thanks for something enjoyable to read!

Beautiful. Absolutly wonderful story.

I have no critisisms about this, save that it was a little short. Otherwise, it was perfect.

Great job!

That was great, yet sad at the same time. Loved it.