Shock and Awe! Oh my gosh...Oh, boy...Great story! You're a fantastic writer!

Read my last review, because I would have just copied and pasted it here (with some minor adjustments). However, I am a bit confused. I can get most of the character nicknames right: Fire Tree (Willow), Old Owl (Giles), Sunlight Girl (Buffy), Demon Girl (Anya), and Empty Man (Xander). However, I am having a bit of trouble with the Sad Princess and the Grey Lady. I have a feeling that the Grey Lady is Tara and the Sad Princess is Cordelia. The timeline is what confuses me. If Xander has only one eye (according to Star Song), then Cordelia would have been in L.A. unless Buffy or someone managed to convince her to come to Sunnydale.

Whoa ... Dawn? I didnt see that coming. Although maybe i should have? Increadibly well done. a question though (or maybe a few?) who were the "grey lady" and the "sad princess" and the rest of them. the sunlight girl was buff, i think, and the owl guy was giles? but i'm not so sure about the rest. still though. amazing. and the one that came before it, star songs, i think. i loved them!

Just a great as the first one. Darker, you know, but I sure don't mind. :)

it was dark very dark dark is good

Whoa. Dawn is like dru's kid...cool. Ok I know its wrong for Xander to be looking at sawn but this is an awesome plot. Cool.

I really like it I hope u keep going that would be really kewl.

Wow!

I don't even know where to start. This is by far one of the best pieces of fan fiction I have ever read.

You're writing is phenomenal, and you capture the esence of Dru so well. It's like you're actually inside her head. And yes it was surreal, but that's part of what makes it so intersting.

Love, love, love the characters (Dawn is my favorite, especially as a vamp, and Drusilla is just the most out-there character ever). And I like that you chose Xander to be their new toy, hehe (nice little twist).

I enjoyed reading this immensely and look forward to reading more from you.

I especially liked the imagery of the white and green and black Miss Edith "sees" swirling within each of the players. The creepy, erotic scene with Xander was vivid, too. Xander didn't lose his eye until Season 7, when is this taking place?

wow. that was intense, i loved it! :D
It had me guessing all the way through, trying to figure out who they all were. I must admit i first thought pixie girl might be buffy, but then there was that thing about spike and 'daddy'. It's much more intense when its dawn though because shes always seen as the little girl, innocent and harmless. Like i said, i loved it! I'm adding it to my favourites! :D

That was very Drucilla, very dark and very good. Great job.