 Anne Louise 2009-11-21 . chapter 5 Oh, Lord, it's been three years, now, I guess?
But I don't mind giving it a shot, so, maybe, one day if you can update this, I am reading it. C:
And Kratos is no ho. He is just smokin' hot. *¬* |
 Frosty Pig 2008-02-21 . chapter 5This story makes me giggle.. Its very cute and I really wish you would update, its too good of a story to drop! ^_^! |
 Jenn 2007-09-20 . chapter 5 Such a lovely thing this story is, please do continue! |
 Spiritua Masquerade 2007-06-21 . chapter 5I know it's been an eternity since you udated, but I'd like to ask if you'd continue? Hah, probly not gonna happen, but... You have a way with words, and you've made me see possibility in this pairing where I've never seen it before. Which is saying something, since I'm generally the person to go to for unusual pairings. Heh. It's your choice, really, but... I had to try. Heh. --spiritua |
 tears of a mermaid 2006-09-02 . chapter 5This story is really great so far. i love it and the plot. its really excellent. I cant wait to see what's going to happen. it's like the end of every chapter leaves you with anticipation for the next one...
Love it loads. fantastic story and cant wait for the next chapter. |
 firedragongirl 2006-08-16 . chapter 5 ^.^ I like how this is coming along! Please continue soon! ^.^ |
 K Q Halves 2006-07-21 . chapter 5Yeah! The sparring scene. As I expected Zelos lost. You're going
to continue this, right? I'm wondering what Mithos has in store
for Zelos. Ah! Suspense. Please up date or at least
give a hint... Wait skip the last part, just up date. Giving
me a hint will only increase agony of waiting. I love your story. |
 K Q Halves 2006-07-21 . chapter 4Wow. Another drunken chapter. Heheh. Alyssa is the blonde groupie, right? That was pretty funny how you made her chase Kratos like that. As for the end of the chapter it kind of surprised me. I must have been oblivious to the prologue when
Yuan was massaging Kratos' back. How could I have missed that sign? Oh, well. Once again, a good chappie. |
 K Q Halves 2006-07-21 . chapter 3Hey, since this was fives years before the journey started that
would make Zelos seventeen, so uh...wouldn't he still be in
school anyway? Oh, right! The Sunday school must have made him
graduate early. Ah, and Zelos graduated from Sybak, just wanted
to let you know. Anyway great chappie.^_^ |
 K Q Halves 2006-07-21 . chapter 2Poor Zelos. The girls seem to want to comfort him, but their
probably just bothering him. I like the part when Zelos takes
the flower from Kratos, that was so like him. |
 K Q Halves 2006-07-21 . chapter 1Heheh. Zelos is already an alcohalic? Well I can't blame him.
Good start. |
 Sylvia Viridian 2006-05-22 . chapter 5I just took a look through the reviews, and realized that I have, thus far, utterly failed at reviewing this wonderful fic, which is something that should be remedied. Especially considering the fact that you're one of my inspirations, and even part of the reason I converted to liking this pairing. The theory that Kratos trained Zelos is something I've encountered elsewhere, but you're the first I've known to write a fic based around it.
Anyway. This is such a great fic, with three of my favorite Symphonia characters ever, all completely in-character and all extremely hot. I eagerly await the next chapter! |
 professor ren 2006-04-23 . chapter 5This story is really good, original plot. I like it. You write Kratos and Zelos really well. Update soon, alright? |
 nife 2006-04-02 . chapter 5You updated!
YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!!
*ahem*
I mean I'm glad.
Please update again soon. |
 TheOneYouCallWe 2006-03-19 . chapter 4Note: I love you and your penname.
...mostly your penname. Rocky Horror Picture Show is love.
Damnit, why'd you stop updating? Update, **! Now!
...this story is love, also.
It's all love between us! |