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| wjobsessed 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI am reading all the older Cj ff. I just watched EY again recently, and I really like this story. Thanks:) |
| Ayjah 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abusethe way it should have been - dang tension to keep a series going :P |
| Mary 2005-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs near as I can tell, there is nothing in your story that needs fixing. I could so easily picture Jordan and Woody as I read it! And it left me with a totally happy, warm glow at the end. Keep writing! You're good at it. You have the ability to write the character(s) so that the reader can see them like they were right in front of them. Keep working with that; it's a great asset! |
| Mallorysgirl 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abusePlease write more CJ fic. You've made a great job on this one:) |
| somedayiwillwrite 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abusei like the ending =D |
| xanya-forever 2005-05-17 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely perfect fic. Seriously. Couldn't have asked for better! 'Embraceable You' only aired last night in Australia and I'm still getting over it. I mean, I've decided to take it as a good thing (Jordan basically admitted - if only to herself - that she wants Woody) but still, this fic was exactly what I needed to ease the immediate pain. The characterization is spot on, the title is the only thing that could make this fic even more wonderful than it already is, the sentiments are realistic and sweet (yeah, they give me THAT feeling in my heart) and the writing is well constructed. Honestly, what more could I ask for? You must definitely continue your foray into Crossing Jordan fanfiction, because I couldn't imagine a better beginning. Absolutely great work! |
| Paige Turner ME 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat job on your first CJ fic! You've written the characters really well. |
| veggie_5 2005-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAhh... just thinking about the episode makes me want to pull someone else's hair out! LOL... I liked your version much better. :) Can't wait to read more fics from you. |
| tova77f 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abusean absolutely wonderful job. The episode frustrated me to know end and I really wish it had ended more like this. I can't wait to read more of your work. |
| celticgina 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abusenice job!! please write again...you did very well! |
| TiaRat 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseSuch a frustrating end to this episode...I like yours much better. |
| inspire.me 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseHey this was great! Not bad for your first CJ fic, I hope you write more stories! |
| rachel 2005-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved it!! |
| jtbwriter 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThank you-an adult-highly IC solution to that piece of ... we were handed-I guess to set us up for the finale! I love Jordan's method of "keeping" Woody's attention-and her analogy of the "plate"! Great fic-thanks! |
| Blaney 2005-05-03 ch 1, | abuseLove it, keep up the good work |