Hey, I know you're revamping this thing but could you keep the old one up too cause I'd like to read it.

NO! Well that sucks.

Or, you could look at your story online, write down the names and current plot, then look at the reviews for your story. Just a tip from one author to another. And, yeah, that really sucks that everything got deleted. Well, Asta out.

All righty then! I didn't review this chappy, so here it goes! Once again, Aillyra was portrayed perfectly, but there's something I noticed. Does Aillyra have a crush on Rayden? That scene towards the end made me do a double take. This is going to be interesting. And how come you haven't updated in so long? I wanna read more!

YAY!! WHE! ^_^ Don't mind me... *giggle* Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Atrum Angelus

AH! You reviewed Yellow VS Green2, but I never got it... weird. But I found something very disturbing... we write the same way. Which is a good thing. You are a good writer from this story. Hope to read more!_! BTW, did you like Yellow VS green

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Good chappie! ^_^ Can't wait for the next one!

Sweet! I'm so happy to see an update. I look forward to next chapter.

not signed in! sorry! but this chapter is really good, please update really soon because i like this story a lot. (you can see 'cause its on my favorites list). by the way, have you seen the new movie?!?!?!?! its so good. anyways, update soon!

Hey that wasn't half bad. I'm glad you put in where my Character was telling about how Revan was batteling Malak when he was interrupted. But you forgot to put what he was wearing and the color of his lightsaber. You might want to put that in next.

That was very good! Work on varying sentence structures and try to put in more pronouns. Also, try to get some more emotion in, and tell us what some of the characters are thinking. Mind you, I'm not saying that your work is bad, I'm just trying to help you get better. And you portrayed Aillrya just perfectly. To end this review, here's an interesting thought. Would C3-PO know that Aillyra's an android as well?

Bye, FOR NOW!
junana107

Now where's my Megaton Hammer...

(This is a review for chapter 1) That was a pretty cool chapter. You really captured the insanity of Knights of the Old Republic just the way I love it. So many lightsabers(even the non-jedi) and I like you combining Seperatist forces and Imperial forces. I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much.

That was so sweet! I love the fact Shaylon was in the first chapter! I'm so glad you could actually use her so well. Thanks. Can't wait for the next chapter.

That was awesome. Me like! Me like! Yeahahaha... I shouldn't have had sugar today... Anymoo, can't wait for the next chapter! And you portrayed Ijelle perfectly. It doesn't surprise me she fell no her face. *snicker*.

This was good. I really like Rayden. He seems awesome. anyway, update soon!