It's a shame you didn't finish this. It was really good. I would have loved to know who lived and who died.

I really like this story. It's very angsty and full of action and I really like it. I hope you update it soon. I also find that I like Gai in this story. He's not the usual over-the-top guy that he normally is. It's a nice change.

This story is absolutely amazing and touching. It is so well written and makes me want to cry but in the way that only fantastic stories can.

wow. This story is very very wonderful. Why you dont continue this . PLEASE hurry to continue this

Gosh me loves this fic it makes me cry but thats okay need a little angst once in a while. I really like Gai he seems more human. I dont know if that makes sense though. -.- hehe. I cant wait for the next chap! Me wishes u luck! ^.~

it's a shame that this seems to be abandoned. there are just so many different stories and emotions, and you manage to combine them into one whole thing that somehow makes sense.

your writing, like always, is very powerful and poignant. this fic is a gem.

I'm really bummed that this seems to be abandoned, because it's a great fic! Even though the last update was years ago, I'll put it on alert in case you ever decide to pick it back up.

I love this story...It's not similar to any other story I've read and I'm so glad that I found it!

...wow.
This must be the most crude, realistic approach to a war fic I've read. It's heart-wrenching, masterfully so.
The fact that it hasn't been updated in so long must probably mean that you won't continue it any longer, but if you ever do, I'd really like to read that. I kinda want to know what happens next.
Oh well. Great job on this. At least there are plenty of your stories I haven't read. :)

This...is brilliant. You have true talent. I cried, I laughed, I...fell in love with your story. You're bloody brilliant. All the characters seem alive and very much real people, and it has the right amount of...everything (tragedy, romance, adventure, etc) to keep me hooked. Please, continue!

I love your story! Beautiful! cried when Raido was thinking about Genma!

I really really love the story, I really really really hope you can finish the story! I can't wait to see what happeens next!

Even though it seems unlikely the story will be finished, i just wanted to say that i really loved it. And your writing. It's fantastically beautiful and the descriptions are perfect.

I'm not usually an Angst reader, but i love that you weren't afraid to kill characters, even our most loved ones.

So, thanks, for sharing such a great story.

I luv ur story! I've told a bunch of my friends about it and they all luv it 2. We all just want 2 kno when the next chapter is going 2 Come out!

An amazingly amazing sad story!!I love the way you describe everything and jump around from place to place.That bothers some people,but I kinda like it.It really is an awesome story,but I know how real life is.
*[Cries like a little girl]*I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!*[Sniffles]*Iruka's too young to die!T_T
Update when you can,please?

~therealChahiro