Awesome.

Awesome use of the elipsis (...) when he spoke.
Awesome use of incidents to portray emotion.
Awesome idea.

My one complaint is it still sounds the same as the others...but in terms of merits of the language itself. You've done very very well. My imaginary hat is off to you.

beautiful and so sad

*loves Vegeta/Serenity fics*

great story this one was just as great as the the other two

i like your story so far. please bring out the next one soon.

You're welcome! ^_^

aWW, It was so sad and sweet! Can't wait for the next one!

Anyway, if you're ever interested in another suggestion, here it goes:

If you're planning on a happy ending, you could state that, fourty years after the marriage, Vegeta still looks young because saiyans age a lot slower than humans, while Bulma's all old, being alredy seventy years old and having aged like humans do. So, almost a decade ago, when she was sixty, they had agreed that it was best if they separated, though staying on freindly terms. Trunks and Rin are very happy and already have a couple of half lunarian half saiyan kids... But then, Chaos attacks Crystal Tokyo, and Endymion dies protecting Serenity. She becomes Sailor Cosmos (a it happens in the manga) and destroys it. She's all alone now, and Bulma encourages Vegeta to go to her...

On the other hand, you could also make it a sad ending if you wanted, sating that, Endymion wasn't killed, but Serenity became Cosmos anyway, and then Bulma urged Vegeta to go help defeat Chaos, since they no longer had Goku (he left with the dragon Shenlong for eternity at the end of Dragon Ball GT, remember?). Serenity also known as Sailor Cosmos and Super Saiyajin Level 4 Vegeta destroyed Chaos together, but they both died because of it. And the last words Vegeta heard was Serenity's voice whispering to him something like: "This time, my love... we'l be reborn, and I'll stay with you forever..."(meaning, Serena knew they had been granted with reincarnation because of the deed of having stopped Chaos).

Aw... the sad ending isn't so sad, is it? Cool! ^^P

i liked your stories so far but everything could be a bit more...developed. Your style comes off more as listing emotions than actually feeling them. Also, it would've been an interesting twist if you had shown Usagi's POV first this time. anyway, can't wait to read your conclusion!