I fell out of my chair laughing but with with the happy dance thing i practicly died. GOOD JOB ON THIS! Keep up the good work;)

hahaha i laughed alot at the bit were sirius screamed and pounced on james. ahhhh...classic

“Seeing as she’s pushing a human being out of her butt, we’ll forgive her.”

...i'm not sure if you as the author is ignorant to the fact or you were making a joke out of it. but... it don't come out of her butt honey. and i don't see lupin being ignorant to that. lupin was the smartest maurader and i don't see him not knowing which place a baby comes out of. otherwise i enjoyed the story. it was cute.

yay :D

loved it, ta

this was bloody amazing! siriusly good! your characterisation is very good, I like their personalities! and the conversation was so typicall marauderic (is this a word?)... :D

It was a good Idea! :)

LOL! I love it -So funny -And cute! MARAUDER S FOREVER!

Aww so cute story ! I loved the part of James saying "I can't see you anymore" hahaha So pretty funny!

Well done! Thats exactly how it would have happened hehe. you totally nailed it! Hole in One!

Very cute. How old are they supposed to be, 20? Great job!

Hahahaha! Great! "Have you gone nutters?" "Quite possibly". Sirius' toasts were great! I love how James broke the ice and how you portrayed each character. Great, fix the grammar and it would be faultless- if you want I don't mind beta-ing it for you.

I loved how you mixed in the humor with this story. very good.

Cute...

You do realise that Sirius 'girlfriend' has the same name as someone Petunia Dursley mentioned-odd coincidence...(evil laughter in background)

Keep up the good...great...brilliant...perfect work!

lol this is awsome

“HEY, YOU LOT, YOU FORGOT TO PAY!”

xD

Lmao. Make a sequal.