very nice very nice

awe so kawaii!! i loved it. great story

Oh my god. his hiei!XD funny! thx for the story!

I really loved it. This is the first Hiei x Touya fanfic I read and it was so sweet. I just love Hiei but I think I'm stating to love touya just as much. he is so misteriouse just like Hiei but in a calmer way. keep on the writting it's great.

ps. sory for the mistakes, english is not my first language.

Write other TxH story!! Your awesome writer!!

Wow, fascinating! I can't help but wonder how the gang would react. Excellent job, cute story and nice writing style.

awe ^^ I like this. So sweet ^^ Great job! :D

Hey! This is great! I luveses it so far!! ^^ *adds to faves*

I LOVE the strange pairings, and TouyaHiei is one I do worship! ^_^

I liked how you wrote a PWP (plot what plot) and I dream the day in which you will write a fic longer and sweeter with this couple!

I also love JinHiei and the common KuramaHiei (I just neede Hiei to be the uke...), but what about writing a fic with the threesome JieiHieiTouya? That would be great! ^_^

Howedver, try to write more! Please!

MF

Oh, I liked this fic! I'm glad to see that Touya/Hiei is spreading. They're just so cute together... ^.^

Aw, such a sweet ending for a well written story. Good job!

oh wow this is getting really good, i cant wait to find out what happens next. please update soon. Ja Ne

Aw, just one more chapter? Better be a good one...(like there is a chance there won't be a happy ending ^_^) Anyways really good story so far!

why would some demon try to keep hiei out cold when everyone is dying around him? stupid demon has no brains. That was a pritty cool chapter, cant wait to find out what happens next, mainly wondering when touya is gonna stop killing and get hiei away from there, and remove the poison wards. please update soon. Ja Ne

You really have a talent! I knew I always liked Touya! This chappie rocks! Update more I say! ^_^
P.s. If I could, I would give you more than one review, you deserve it.