Nice one,only that it has multiple grammar errors and sentence structuring. Please,continue! I'm a MAJOR fan of Zhongda! :)

次の戦いを見る非常によい、傾斜した待ち時間。

Gotta love Sima Yi's snarky comments.

Cool chappie!

<_< Although, I'll warn you, be careful not to use too much DW/SW/historical reference, reason being because you don't want readers to get bored. Also, it kinda ruined the flirting moment with Zhongda and Huang Yueying.

I mean, Zhongda's a man of words and intellect, so use those words and intellect in an attempt to win Yueying's heart! And I mean, it would seriously almost work (it almost worked because he called her hot =|), and I mean show the inner struggles, yah?

Other than that, I do like this. =]

Zbou Yu should so lay the beatdown on Jiang Wei.

There were several funny moments, and I especially loved last chapter's end. Sima Yi would definitely try to kill Guo Jia, but what about Jia Xu?

Nice work.

EK! Xiahou Dun is the hawtest and greatest! ^w^ Please oh please he should win!! Lol. The story is GREAT, the humour is contagious! Update more! :D

With so many in the arena, theres gonna be alot of eliminating soon.

lol

I went back to look back at the tier stand and, oh, Gawd, Lol! The hotdog thing was hilarious! The mental image just makes me laugh uncontrollably. Awesome!

“What kind of men in Wei know anything about love?” Xing Cai asked.

I think decent guys like Zhang Liao, Guo Huai, Chen Tai, Deng Ai, Guo Jia, and Guanqiu Jian can object to that.

Bravo! Zhuge Ke does know nothing! Lol!

Still very good. I loved Deng Ai's taunts and the catfight/discussion between the girls.

“He’s still trying to stalk the Qiaos,” Guo Jia replied.

Classic line.

Lol, seems like I read pretty fast, huh? Nice work! Quite funny.

Lol, my favorite part was the Zhen Ji Zhao Yun bit. This was a good chapter. I liked it. Update soon

lotsaluv

Lettuce

I love your story! It is so cool. Is the mysterious man you?

hey!!

lots of ooh's and aah's in this chapter, especially with the Jiang Wei and Lu Xun burning. I was like Oh no not those two! They're pretty awesome. ^^ lol update soon, it was good. Even though Lu Xun is one of my favorites...the Christina Aguilera...funny as.

Lotsaluv

Lettuce

Ah Huang Gai's bombs hurt. I know from the game. Ouch. I liked this chapter, the song was hilarious and so was the taunting at the start. XD

Lotsaluv

Lettuce