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Lunamaria
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuse... you are EPIC for writing this.
Stardawn
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseokay, that's just sad. I would expect them to be MUCH more engrosed . . . like i am with .
September's Nobara
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseVery entertaining, and it reminded me of quite a few people I know. I found the idea of George and Fred putting a spell on the device quite amusing (though I doubt it was required, considering the addictive nature of most video games, hah hah). Great work with the dialogue, as well as the description of action. Nicely done, all in all!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.
padfootROX
2007-11-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseLOL great story... and creepily realistic 2
Minerva McGonagall Rox
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. I swore off video games some time ago, but yesterday I casually thought of playing one again. I am now completely cured and slightly unnerved. Great story. Have a nice day!
~Minerva McGonagall Rox
Noodlez
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseHahahahaha! I love it!

So how's school?
AmariSanshelle
2007-01-31
ch 1,
abuseLMAO Funny story!!
Random Stuff About Stuff
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was insane. In a good way, but still completely and utterly CRAZY!

And the fact that my brother has been engrossed in his video games ever since he got home makes it even funnier. Especially when he didn't even seem to notice my slightly hysterical laughter.

You know, if I end up sounding like a madwoman every time I read your stuff... maybe you should write some more so that I can sound even crazier! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha!

Ahem... Good job. Keep it up.
Might Have Ben Hur
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseScary.

I'm pretty sure you just wrote a biography on someone without knowing it.
grand jete
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHAH! Wow.
That is the funniest thing I've read all day...
Nothanksnoname
2006-01-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseMaybe there were subliminal messages that said things like “Keep Playing,” and “You’re Not Hungry,” and “You’ve Only Been Playing For Two Minutes, Not Two Hours.”

That's scarily accurate. This was funny, if random. Ron does seem the sort who would get hooked on video games, even if they aren't enchanted.
Cryptic Sarcasm
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseFunny! My sister and My cousin are playing pokemon right now. I wonder if it could happen...
lonely-rebel
2005-08-31
ch 1,
abusehilarious. absolutely hilarious.
CoalTrain
2005-08-21
ch 1,
abuseThis story was really cute, I liked it a lot! My brother is obsessed with his pokemon game, so I can sort of see it all happening, haha.
Anony
2005-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat's the funniest thing I've read in ages.
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