Great job!

Cool! Very nice writing.

I love angst. Very powerful. It's kind of dark, but it was still- I mean it, at th same time, from a different aspect, is very self explanitory.

*awed whisper* That was just beautiful. You have a talent for this...seems more like poetry to me, though.

Excellent depiction of the struggle for connection and the need for disconnection. Sounds like music to me.

Beautiful! Really captures the tangle of emotions inside Remus wonderfully! I will be haunted for some time by it...

I can't understand whats going on really, but this is good...very deep

nice