Good humor, and just enough detail. A bit short, but I can't imagine it being any longer without having to drag it out. Only one typo also, MUCH less than I usually have. For THAT, I give you a MAJOR congrats.

And, I got your review reply for Zeppo 5: Close Encounters of the Xander Kind. By saying you had typos, I was merely confirming your comments. I HAD read the author's note. Sorry if it came off any other way; I have a bit of a problem wording things at times so that they come off clearly.

Keep it up!

lol you should write more...maybe Jack could get the tea to play hockey-form their own SGC league...I could see Jack as the coach now "Hit him for crying out loud!"

Great fic

Sarahx