 geegee 2008-08-31 . chapter 2 sam seems like mary-sue |
 Kuwabara lover112 2007-05-26 . chapter 3I really hope the whole Sam/Kurama thing was a joke cause she's a marysue. |
 bookworm0492 2005-07-12 . chapter 3AGH WWHAT HAPPENS?! MARY-SUES MUST DIE! UPDATE SOON! |
 LordFluffy09 2005-07-05 . chapter 3*Cursing at Mary Sue* Well now that I'm done with that, please update! I'm looking forward the next chappie!
~AnimeLvr ^-^ |
 natsumi-chan 2005-07-01 . chapter 3Can't believe I forgot about this! But you gotta put the next chapter up! Let's see Mary Sue's feeble attempts at revenge. *smirks* |
 Calamity-Angel! (who else?) 2005-05-15 . chapter 3 Yay! Another update! (jumps for joy)
This was a good chapter too, I really liked it. Mary-Sue should die I hate how Mary-Sues always assume that a hot guy is their boyfriend in the first or second chapter! Have Sam kick Mary-Sue for me, or I'll make Brittany do it!
Brittany: Yeah! Kick the Mary-Sue in the ass!
Ja matta!
~The angel of calamity |
 Dreammistress Jade 2005-05-10 . chapter 3Dum dum DAH! That Mary-Sue is plotting somthing evil in her perfect little head. *narrows eyes* Listen up, Miss.Sue. I have a flamethrower and unlike you I'm not a perfect goodie so I WILL use. Ever wondered what you'd look like charred?
Well now that I'm done threatening Sue's life...here's your Mary Sue Basker 60! Bash away! I recommend the continuous torture button. *laughs evilly*
~Toodles!~ |
 Kuramafan-06 2005-05-10 . chapter 3Something isn't right...
That Sue must be preparing something evil, very evil.
Anyways, update soon.
PS: If that Sue does something to Kurama and Sam, I'll make her regret ever being written :D |
 Calamity-Angel 2005-05-07 . chapter 2 Hi! This is a good story. HAHA go Sam! Mary-Sues are evil. But hey... my character Brittany isn't a Mary-Sue is she? Oh God... (bangs head on computer desk) Ow... anyway, this is really good. Keep it up.
The angel of calamity
PS - can you please update The Second Dark Tournament and The Egyptians: The Story of a Band? Please?
PPS - I'm working on chapter 14 of My Reality. Please read it when it comes out? |
 Kuramafan-06 2005-05-07 . chapter 2Poor Sam, that May-Sue. I hate them. I can't stand so "perfect" and, for me, "happy" characters. I kakes me wanna kill them, but they will know that. AGH! Why can't they just go to Hell, as Sam said. But it's pretty cool that someone makes a story laughing at Mary-Sues. That brights my day. Update soon |
 Dreammistress Jade 2005-05-07 . chapter 2Ah man I wanted to see the Mary Sue scream "GOD DONT PUNISH ME!" =( Just kidding! XD Well actually that would've been cool but this was good too. By the way how is it that they can all speak telepathically? I don't know too much about YYH but I'm pretty sure that's Hiei's ability. ^_^; Just wondering. But if you want a REALLY good way to get rid of a Mary Sue...*takes on salesperson voice* then buy the Mary Sue Basher 60. It's quick, efficient, and guaranteed for customer satisfaction or your money back. Only 1 billion dollars at your local "Fanfiction R Us" store.
*goes back to normal* Vunderful offer, isn't it? And the fact that I invented it and get 60% of the income has nothing to do with it. ^_^; Nups, nothing at all.
~Toodles!~ |
 natsumi-chan 2005-05-07 . chapter 2*lmao* This is hilarious! You DO have a point about Mary-sues...I'd personally die if my character turned out to be one...I'd NEVER let that happen. I plan to write stuff about a few diferent YYh pairings to reinforce that. ^.^ Must...be...different! Anyway, add soem more chapters! Lord knows in these horrible final exam preparation days I could use something to cheer me up. Later dude! |
 Dreammistress Jade 2005-05-04 . chapter 1Holy crap! I was working on a story almost the same as this just 5 minutes ago! I guess great minds think alike.=) Hmm I don't think Sam really seems all that Mary-Sueish. But Mary-Sue? Definitely. Love to see some of the expressions on those poor terrified Mary-Sues. XD So continue! Me likes it!
~Toodles!~ |