xD wow, talking about a sudden end! it made me laugh xD

Well, the idea behind it isn't bad at all. What plot there is here is quite good. It definitely could've been elaborated on, though. It took about ten seconds to read this. And there was little/no description.

lol, I thought it was haliarious, nothing wrong with it...; ) then again i like most Sirius/Remus fics...especially the fluffy ones..;)

i didn't completely suck. i don't know how reaching for a book would get you inches away from someones face though.

That was cute. you or whoever wrote it should write more.

Yeah, it is stupid, but it's cute, too. :)
I guess I'm kind of in the middle about this, sorry I can't help with the bet :p

it was actually rather sweet. Although, it seemed kind of detail-less. Not like kissing details, but just details in general. It was rather good though.