I don't think I'll ever forget the image of Orochimaru trying to figure out why Anko was attempting to lick her elbow. Other than that bit of hilarity (I love your take on Anko) great story.

Hahaha, I LOVE this story! Heck, I love everything about it! Every little part! It's amazing! Orochimaru licked his elbow (I would pay money to see that, mwahahaha, love the guy xD), Kakashi's sneezing and Rin's crush, Jiraya's perversion, implications of Kurenai and Asuma (I mean, give them credit! They are the only REAL couple in the series!), etc. Fantastic, I love your writing style and I'm so gonna have to check out your other stories!
Ja ne!

Let me tell you something...This is one of my FAVORITE STORIES EVER! I loved it, my family probably thinks I'm insane, from all the weird noises I have been making, lol. This story is extremely funny, with a huge bittersweet twist to it, that makes me want to cry. I loved all of the moments with Rin, she doesn't get enough attention, same with Obito. So I thank you for writing this story, and I hope that you will write many more.

Love,

Moonlight Huntress

P.S. Loved Anko.
P.S.S. KAKARIN FTW!

Oh, that was just so adorable! What a very original idea -- I mean, there are lots of fics out there about the kunoichis of the Konoha 12, but not a lot about the jounin kunoichis. I think the funniest chapter would be the one with Jiraiya visiting, but the whole story's hilarious. I loved how you characterized the girls -- especially Anko (hyper and disturbing!) and Suzume (I'd love to get some stalking tips from her XP). And the KakaRin was cute, too. The ending was perfect.

This story was so cute and amusing! I have to say, Anko was my favorite. Her hyper atitude and praise for Orochimaru was priceless. Great job! ^^

omg. *wheeze* that was so funny. holy cow. First of all, let me say that I was reading this in a place I should be quiet and composed. I was dying of laughter inside. Thanks for livening up an otherwise boring Friday afternoon!!

I can't get over little psychotic Anko licking her elbow...and getting Orochimaru to prove his godliness...and shizune dying to get Tsunade to do it. Kakashi sneezing like crazy was just awesome. And agreed, the Yondaime is pretty hot. lol. Rin being Jiraiya's editor was hilarious. And Rin's very cute crush on Kakashi. There are too many bits of this story that had me cracking up (quietly) for me to mention.

Your wrap up at the end was nicely done. Everything fit into place really well. >_< Anko trying to lick her elbow >_< my god.

Great job!

How sweet and cute and hilarious!! I love that last bit you added when they were all adults. It gives the story more depth and meaning, I feel ^^ Thanks for sharing!!

P/S: Orochimaru's tongue IS damn cool! *evil laughter*

Hehee, go Tsu-chan! "Ask your sensei, Anko-chan" that was without a doubt an evil thing to do. (Jiraya, when will you learn?)

Fantastic! I loved your characterisation of these kunoichi...

:He did indeed see, she was back to her hyperactive homicidal little self. Joy.:

That made me laugh :D

That was amazingly bittersweet. Made me crack up and want to cry at the same time T.T Nice job!

Oh, and definetely loved Orochimaru touching his elbow with his tongue!!

Hahahahahahahahahaha! This was hilarious! My family probably thinks I'm going insane because of all of the random laughter coming from my room...anyway, this story was awesome! It's nice to see the kunoichi of Konoha act like normal girls for a change, rather than the fighters they normally are. I especially love how you portrayed them when they were younger. Not to mention how hilarious Kakashi's sneezing fit story was...I couldn't stop laughing with that one! It was a little sad at the end though because Rin was gone...but you made up for it when Kakashi flew backwards with a sneeze...that was priceless...
Fantastic story, looking forward to reading more of your work!

Aww that was cute! Kunoichi are awesome...enough said!

Hahahaha this was fantastic.
I was rolling around when I read this in hysterics.
I loved Anko and the sneezing fits with Kakashi had me rolling with laughter.

Wonderfully written fic.

I hardly know what to say about this story, except that it's excellent:) It's not easy to nail that sort of...sad happiness that you nail in the last segment, the one in which Kakashi and Gai are arm-wrestling. I've read lots of Naruto fanfics, and I don't think I've ever felt the loss of Rin so keenly. I think it was mostly accomplished by having them behave so prosaically, with strange ninja stuff being the exception rather than the rule.

I'm not sure what the word is to describe the feeling of happiness even when you're sad, but you nailed it.

My other favorite parts were Orochimaru 'materializing like a vampire' *snicker*, and Jiraiya going over Icha Icha with Rin :D An extremely enjoyable story, and going on my favorites list. Thanks for sharing.