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bloodycherries 7/17/11 . chapter 2
Smart to add the extended
een nihc 4/25/10 . chapter 2
This was so sweet. Seriously I'm glad that you add the extended version. I prefer it better cox it makes the story more complete.
Melitza 11/16/08 . chapter 2
Wonderfully fluffy. Adorable, heartfelt, and nicely records the ups and downs of a relationship that goes 180. :D
Lady Lark 9/23/08 . chapter 2
I could've sworn that I reviewed this a while ago. But apparently I didn't. I apologize for that. This is a very cute and sweet story. I think I like the little drabble part better. But overall I liked the whole thing. _
AGENT Kuma-chan 12/29/07 . chapter 2
aw...(personally, I like to think of these two as siblings, but they are still cute together...)
Tatsumaki-sama 5/3/07 . chapter 2
I love it! It was really sweet of all the things Naruto gave Sakura and what she gave in return.

/When he was ten, he gave her a flower and she gave it back to him crushed from her fist./

I almost cried for Naruto here.

/When he was twelve, he gave her endearments and hugs and she gave him bruises and lumps./

Poor Naruto. It's tough love to win a girl's heart.

/When he was seventeen, he gave her his heart and she gave hers in return./

This one is my all-time favourite.
Noobelinoob 11/10/06 . chapter 2
“You are never touching me again do you hear me!” That line had me laughing heh.
dbzgtfan2004 7/9/06 . chapter 1
This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.
Vegetas-Princess 6/27/06 . chapter 2
"There’s a universal rule that many know, but few seldom heed, that states: What you give you get in return. Luckily for Naruto, he always gave her everything."

Gods I love that line. :)

Wonderfully written! I commend you!
Rasengan-Fox 3/12/06 . chapter 2
awesome very very good i really like it when im bored i come bakk to read this great job.
Parisatis 1/5/06 . chapter 2
how beautiful! *O* I swear that I'm almost crying like a little baby... the extended version was wonderful, the first part was great and beautiful, but this one was PERFECT!
Alpha 9/23/05 . chapter 2
one word: beautiful
paladin 6/2/05 . chapter 1
Why would it matter that Naruto does not belong to you? Nice poem, though.
Shadowfox83 5/24/05 . chapter 2
That was such a great read and I really liked the extended version, especially the part of Naruto questioning Sakura about his kissing, lol.

All in all both versions were fun reads and please make more Naru/Saku fics, Naru/Saku rule! _
Ernilriel 5/20/05 . chapter 2
Awsome I loved it you should do the other thingie too
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