Please please please continue this story, i love it!

Wow. nice hooks and images and description. great taste of flesh. great job.

ACK! I just came across your story... I was really getting into it, it's very well written... and then BAM! It's over? NO!

Can you find it in your heart to write more?

chapters please?

ps. WELL AJA MARRY CRAIG OR NOT?

can i see. shana in chapter 5 please?

chapters please!

truly a good. story

i'd like to see 5.

Wow, love the way you write about the Jem/Rio relationship! Please do some more soon!

This strikes me as the beginning of a story that has a very "cute" feeling, yet it deals with topics a bit more complex and mature than that. You seem to know the characters well, their interactions and motivations, but I would suggest fleshing out their environment and their emotions as you move through the plot. At this stage it just seems like you're shooting tin cans off a fence: your action is so quick, there's no opportunity to savor the flavor of your story. Maybe re-work your pacing a bit and allow your readers to melt into your plot-then the emotion and your intriguing character dynamics will have more of an impact.

will stormer and aja be friends in the end?

i wanna see shana in chapter5

ps. please?

Just stumbled across this story and I was totally blown away. I'm pretty bad about reviewing, but your story is absolutely amazing. It's obvious that you put time and effort into it - good grammar and spelling - but also the characters are true to the show. What a creative way of resolving the whole triangle! And I like the Aja/Craig storyline, too.

Hope you continue. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.

I LOVE YOUR STORIES. CHAPTERS 5 AND 6 PLEASE?

YES! i'm so happy

ps. chapters5 and 6 please?

I'm so glad Rios not angry. I hope things work out for the best.