|Reviews for Who is He Kissing?|
| T 7/20/08 . chapter 4
Please please please continue this story, i love it!
| IamACritic 6/5/08 . chapter 4
Wow. nice hooks and images and description. great taste of flesh. great job.
| ecogirl20 5/29/08 . chapter 4
ACK! I just came across your story... I was really getting into it, it's very well written... and then BAM! It's over? NO!
Can you find it in your heart to write more?
| shana78 2/9/06 . chapter 4
ps. WELL AJA MARRY CRAIG OR NOT?
| shana78 12/6/05 . chapter 4
can i see. shana in chapter 5 please?
| shana78 9/19/05 . chapter 1
| shana78 8/14/05 . chapter 4
truly a good. story
i'd like to see 5.
| foxwings007 8/14/05 . chapter 1
Wow, love the way you write about the Jem/Rio relationship! Please do some more soon!
| NepenthesMiranda 8/4/05 . chapter 3
This strikes me as the beginning of a story that has a very "cute" feeling, yet it deals with topics a bit more complex and mature than that. You seem to know the characters well, their interactions and motivations, but I would suggest fleshing out their environment and their emotions as you move through the plot. At this stage it just seems like you're shooting tin cans off a fence: your action is so quick, there's no opportunity to savor the flavor of your story. Maybe re-work your pacing a bit and allow your readers to melt into your plot-then the emotion and your intriguing character dynamics will have more of an impact.
| COOL 7/19/05 . chapter 4
will stormer and aja be friends in the end?
| cool 7/14/05 . chapter 4
i wanna see shana in chapter5
| Sabrina 7/7/05 . chapter 4
Just stumbled across this story and I was totally blown away. I'm pretty bad about reviewing, but your story is absolutely amazing. It's obvious that you put time and effort into it - good grammar and spelling - but also the characters are true to the show. What a creative way of resolving the whole triangle! And I like the Aja/Craig storyline, too.
Hope you continue. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
| Cool 7/2/05 . chapter 4
I LOVE YOUR STORIES. CHAPTERS 5 AND 6 PLEASE?
| cool 6/20/05 . chapter 4
YES! i'm so happy
ps. chapters5 and 6 please?
| T 6/20/05 . chapter 4
I'm so glad Rios not angry. I hope things work out for the best.