I have been waiting for you to update for months!I like the storyline. I think you did a good job of portraying Squall's character in this story except for the part of being a crooked cop. Anyway, are you updating soon?

I also like your previous squinoa story. It's fantastic!I love the ending!

I like the way you started the story. It's a flashback and the way the story goes, it's exhilarating, making readers wonder what is happenning to squall and rinoa since she is injured. However, it's a pity that you're not updating the story.Anyway, I hope you'll continue.

woohoo! this is really cool, please continue!

I know you haven't upsated in a while, so that means you probably won't ever again. But that would be a tragedy. This fic is going really good, I'd like to see it finished. Good luck!

Very very promising

Just enough cold intimacy to attract the readers, but not enough to completely throw off the mysterious aura of the characters portrayed.

Very very addicting

wow...you better update soon the last time you updated was in may. so please update soon this is interesting.

This looks very promising. I hope you continue this. Btw, love the "Sin City" inner monologue thing you had going in the first chapter. ^^ I enjoyed your other story, you should update soon.

This is really good! I could tell straight away that this fic was based on Sin City. It's a different, yet very effective angle that the story is being told from. I'm new to reading fics, but I haven't encountered anything like this before! If I'm honest, I didn't think it'd work very well at first, but now I'm intrigued... and totally hooked! Each sentace is well written and it just seems to flow, so that it's easy to read. Anyway, I'll just round off by saying that I'm very impressed with your work, and I hope you update soon! xx

Intresting...very intresting. When's the next chapter coming out?

nice storyline...good...

I hope you will udpate soon.

Great work! =) It's time Rinoa finally got some scenes of her own! I just realised how Squall sounds a little like Max Payne... Not that it's a bad thing, Max Payne rockz!

Maybe instead of 'RED'.. like REDXI? Oh well it's still a good edgy name for a dark alley.

Great chapter. Squall is COOL in this story. That's actually kinda rare..

hi again!
I think its good that while squall is being a jerk he's still being a gentlemen
Kinda
haha update soon!

I like your switches on whos point of view it is..makesme want to write..