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| Liv 2008-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abusehey you shouldn't feel bad it was really good! i would really like it you wrote another chapter, i'd like to find out what happens?!?!? |
| Reality Is Elusive 2006-01-19 ch 1,  | abusei think this could be really good, but the chapters need to be longer, and i suggest starting a new line every time a new person speaks, just makes it easier to read. i reckon its a great idea, ive only just finished the first in the trilogy (the actual books) and loved them, i wish more people would write about them. i think it rocks, please update soon |
| ashke 2006-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abusea bit short but it has got me interested any way. can't wait to see some more |
| amber gazder 2005-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abusehey great story. you should keep writing. you made tons of errors. sorry no offence but punction. this letter may not be a very good show of writing but whatever. if you want me to point out your errors i can. just e-mail me back. i am a huge fan of the ancient futer. if you want help writing or editing i don't mind helping. get back to me soon. amber:) ps. if you read the story again more closely katren never did tell them her name and later tory called her by her name. keep writing |
| Keridwen89 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWOAH!! THERE IS AN ANCIENT FUTURE SECTION!! haha. I'm going to have to branch out from writing Crossing Jordan fanfics from now on!! OMG!! That is SOO SOO cool!! Nice story, too! LMAO. Only its 'Katren' not 'Katrin'. |
| cerasi1 2005-08-29 ch 1, | abuseFinally! Somebody decided to post an Ancient-Future story that is actually Ancient-Future based! Meanwhile, I'm really rather amused by this, are you continuing? cd |
| ssdiablo 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abusecool, keep it going, not bad, haha, xoxcazza |
| Abby Marie Sheppard 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abusehey I love the storyline, but just one little thing.Its Katren and Ione ok sorry i had to say it as i love the book. Please continue with it as i love the basic story line. |
| spikes-slayer29590 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseok, i usually don't read any other fan fiction besides spuffy (spike and Buffy) but i have just read the ancient future and had to see if there were any stories. this sounds like an excellent idea, i'd love to see what happens to them in highschool...it should be awesome. i'm glad you're gonna keep all the original parings coz i love all the couples in the book. please update soon as i am really interested in seeing where this story is heading! (longer chapters would be great though!) |
| sir_pent_ 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseallo allo allo if you were invisible for a day would you dance naked in frount of a murdered to prove you were better than a murderer? I would |
| Mirrors of the Mind 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abusei love this series... it's really great to see a fanfiction about it. keep it up, i can't wait for a second chapter =) |
| rootbeerfloat1324 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI do think you should update the story, I love the trilogy. go on, update... |