love it

yay they got together in the end!

this is sweet... haha.. i would like to imagine that fuji did love ryoma all this while. just that he have to give tezuka a chance...

glad u made it fujiryo.. they are so 'together'...

kawai

hehe, video games that's so cute *squees* ) i like your story very much! :)

Aww I really like this story. I find it strange that Fuji knows about the picture, but then again Fuji was always a mystery. Great Story!

Hehehe, good fic good fic. I much liked it. Keep up the great work!

aww. this story was cute

U left out a 'the' in: "It had been at the end of practice when the rest of (the) team". I don't think u should have put an 'End' at the near end because it slightly ruined the flow. Myabe u could have put another sentence instead. Fuji is always so cheeky. That's wat I love about him _. I quite like the story!

So how did Fuji know about the picture?

Weird yet interesting

I want to same something coherent and helpful but about all I can manage is:

That was lovely. It really, truly wase. And the way Ryoma would keep looking at the picture without ever being sure why...just the fact that he kept it... My fangirl heart has sighed dreamily all over this fic. It was something I needed right now, something reassuring, that despite Tezuka, Fuji and Ryoma will be together.

Thanks so much for sharing! _.

*floating happily in the air* OMG teh cuteness... TEH CUTENESS! Lovely fic... really... love your Fuji, he's so... well, Fuji :D nice job, dear, we love you!

Very nice for a first-in-a-fandom piece. And a bonus for us that it's FujiRyo. ::smile::

You have a very strong grasp of the English language and the characters, Fuji in particular. I love your Fuji (especially at the very end. Scheming, playful, et al).

The characterization for Ryoma you've done very well, especially in consideration of the difficulty to write from a specific internal view point and not go all over the place character-wise. One minor nitpick though, centered in on one line actually. You wrote Ryoma's reaction to his father throwing out the picture (and video games) as something of an excess. Up until that point, you have Ryoma portrayed as someone who'd not less things affect him to the extremes... that he actually SCREAMS at his father seems a little farfetched, no?

But good job anyway. :D

*giggles* Fuji/Ryo cuteness

kawai that's cute