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| anonymous 2008-03-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseI think this is a very good plot line and would really like to see where you take it. |
| Sam 2005-08-26 ch 4, anon. | abuseHey! I really like this! I can't wait for another chapter to be added. It is well written and well thought out. |
| Caty Jean 2005-05-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnother lovely chapter! You picked up Marshall's character perfectly! I only have one problem with your chapters...THEY'RE TOO SHORT! Make them longer, squirrel queen, or I'll have to call my Canadian contacts and tell them to sneak into your house and the moment you get home tie you into a chair until you write a very long chapter. Until the next chappie... ~ Caty Jean ~ |
| Caty Jean 2005-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseFIRST REVIEW! YAY! But this is going to be incredibly short since I spot another chapter. Great start! And off I go... |