I love this!
You HAVE to update!!

He raised an eyebrow, “You’re stalking me?”
I leaned in, “Do you want me to?”
He chuckled, “You’re not from around here are you?”

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The color flew from my face, “DANIEL! YOU LITTLE $'£& I’m going to &/#!ING £&$” YOU! GET BACK HERE YOU &£!$&£#!”
“Err, why did you just shout out a lot of symbols?”
o.0
I stood up to run after him but looked back down at Ace, and the to the hobbling old woman, and then back at Ace, and then at Daniel who was running away, and then at the old woman, and back to Daniel, and the old woman, then Ace, still Ace, then the old woman, then Ace, then Daniel, then two dogs that where humping. And then I laughed. And then I forgot what I was doing.

LMFAO!

That Is All.

Oh YAY and update, wo0t I love updates *smiles*.
This chapter was crazy, lol but I love crazyness.
~xKatyx
“Oh My God! Oh My God!” That's exactly how I would act seeing Ace Merrill, =S
"Mr. Stud Muffin" yes that's how I would descripe Ace, =D
"then two dogs that where humping" LMAO Is it some what childish of me to be laughing at the thought of two dogs humping? *thinks*

I hope you update this asap, =D

this is very funny. i cant wait to read more!

WoOhOo! are we a little random in this story?! methinks so! but i love it!! the baby sitter(still doesnt have a name does she?) is much like me:) keep writing! kisses

This is really good! It's very funny and you have very good characters. Sorry if this sounds weird, I'm really bad with reviews but I fell guilty if I don't review. All I can really say is that I'd like to read more...so update soon. This review still sounds weird so I think I'll flame you instead, it might be easier.
Your story is quite bad! >:-( !!
Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, I am evil and nasty, look how many exclamation marks I used!

Ps.I agree completely with the babysitter about kids...little bastards.

haha that was great, update! you must update this and your other fics..please. :P
:D

That chapter was awesome as always, I hope you update as soon as you can, I wonder who she's talking to? UPDATE.

Dr Spooky Muffin, this is great I love it, wonder what is going to happen, I like the name for this story, that reminds me I should be doing my homework. Thunderstorms are scary, Just a thought when they woke up in the field does that mean Daniel is wearing his Barbie Pajamas?, lol that would be hillarious. I wonder who they are going to see first The Cobras (*sigh*) or The four boys.
"Greg: Oh yeah…all night long baby :pelvic thrusts:
Dad: Why you Son of a –" LMFAO that was one of the funniest things I've read.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE...PLEASE

i have to read this story- sorry i haven't talked to you in awhile or updated for that matter ::cough:: i've been busy taming my god forsaken heart. men suck! anyway- i miss you louie girl- i'm off to read this story. hey you haven't updated in a while either- we need to hop on the updating ban-wagon! woot! -Peace Up A-Town Down -Sophia.

i am ALWAYS a fan of randomness. this brightened my day. plz update!

Can't wait for the next chapter!! This is really good so far!!

I really can't wait 4 u 2 update, this story is the best. Can't wait 2 find out what's going 2 happen.

UPDATE PLEASE, I've added this 2 my fav stories.

That was really good, I've got a story kind of like this but not as good, anyway i can't wait 4 u 2 update, i'm happy 4 u that your life is going well, keep up the great work.

Wicked story it's funny, I hope u update this and your other stories, your a talented writer.