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| x-smith 2008-10-10 ch 163, | abuseyes! finally! a chapter that doesn't revolve around Sam! don't get me wrong, i like this story, and i know the thing with Sam is an important plot thingy, but it was starting to drag a bit. this was a good chapter, interesting perspective with DarkAngelicmon. i have a theory about his past based off what i read, if i'm right then it should be very interesting. can't think who the Ruler of Darkness is meant to be though, you are planning on telling us before the end of the story right? ;P more talk about the first team of DDs, does this mean we get to meet them soon? if so then i look forward to seeing that. next chapter is...home away from home. right? it's gonna go back to Sam again isn't it? oh well. i trust that will be over soon, and then we can get back to the rest of the story. on the whole you have a very interesting plot going here, and i look forward to seeing that unfold in the coming chapters. |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-10-08 ch 163, | abuseWhy didn't you tell the name of the Ruler of Darkness I...you know...Gra... Scary chapter.. |
| Digi-Girl101 2008-10-07 ch 163, | abuseOMG!! LOVE IT!! UPDATE ASAP!! My fav chappy so far! |
| Shire Folk 2008-10-07 ch 163, | abuseWow. I did not expect a chapter from DarkAngelicmon's perpective at all. I think that this has been one of my favourite of all 163 chapters to date. Seriously. The only few that would beat it were the ones just coming out when I started reading featuring the kids and the adults talking about the Digital World and the adults' roles as the digidestined before them. I- I want to know what Lucemon knows! May the Grace of the Valar Protect You Shire Folk |
| WalkingDisasters 2008-09-30 ch 162, | abuselove the conversation between the twins x] |
| Serenity984 2008-09-30 ch 162, | abuseAnother great chapter! I love this story, I know I said it before. I wanted to let you know that I am still reading though I don't post many reviews. It's hard to find different words to say how great this story is. Keep up the writing, I love reading it! |
| Midnight808 2008-09-30 ch 162, | abuseSam was really crule to Ken god he is such a dramaqueen |
| Digi-Girl101 2008-09-30 ch 162, | abuseOMG!! LOVE IT!! UPDATE ASAP!! I loved the ending ... : ) |
| Digi-Girl101 2008-09-17 ch 161, | abuseOMG! LOVE IT!! UPDATE ASAP!! Poor Sam .. |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-09-16 ch 161, | abuseGee, this was far better than I hoped! great work! |
| RoyalKnightX 2008-09-10 ch 160, | abuse160. Wow. I think this is the longest fic I've ever seen (not counting fics separated into different parts), and certainly one of the best, but you already knew I thought all this, and this review is about the chapter, not the whole story. So why am I still talking about this? I think it's because of the 160. Yeah, that's probably it. 160 is a really big number, y'know? Like, really big. It's huge. Gigantic even. I-mph! *forces number obsessed demon that had possessed self back into the the depths from whence it came* BACK DEMON. IF YOU LIKE NUMBERS, THEN GO COUNT THE NEAR INFINITE TIMES I HAVE DEFEATED YOU, FIEND! Ahem. Anyway, the chapter. Chapter 160 (I said back, you!). Ken! Oh poor Ken, worrying about everything. It's good he finally told them, but Sam still doesn't know it all... so Ken will have to tell it all again! And to the one that it will be hardest to tell it to... And then of course Miya. Oh wow, she's scaring me... because I'm scared for Ken! He's just got to be terrified of what she's gonna ask... Ruler guess! I think... the common cold. I hate this thing. Although I seem to have the uncommon cold, possibly even the rare cold. It's... bad, missed school two days already. Surely nothing is more evil! Missing school is good, but not when you get unholy amounts of make-up work and you feel horrible! Evil I say, Evil! |
| B89 2008-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI've read this on and off, and might catch up. But I'm at least in the current story arc and this was another great chapter! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-09-09 ch 160, | abuseMickey vs. Sam! Miya vs. Ken! |
| Miss Anonymous hp 2008-09-08 ch 160, | abuseWow. This chapter brought a lot of interesting things into the light. I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm settled into college and this chapter couldn't have come at a more opportune moment. And, besides, so many interesting things were said in this chapter! It was another talky chapter, but those are always so interesting, I can't help but love them. Ryoko has certainly started to take the forefront of talking lately. Of course, the fact that he's starting to understand a lot of this stuff a lot better because of what his dad went through helps, but it's rather interesting to see him taking the lead like that. After all, only a week and a half prior, he had been the one nearly fainting first trip to the Digital World, so this is a nice change. He adapts rather well if given the time, I must say. Because of his adapting spirit, I don't think we have anything to worry about from him. He seems pretty solid, and I think he's confident enough now not to worry about his confidence faltering any. Even with Sam's sudden "hate" toward him, he's still standing strong, and I say, "Go Ryoko!" for that. I really do want Tai and TK/Kari to finally come clean about everything, but... I don't think TK/Kari will. I'm starting to think that Tai will - after all, he's pretty good at the monkey see-monkey do thing (Matt being the monkey and all, lol). However, we already know from personal experience that TK isn't quite the follow-in-brother's-footsteps type. I think if Tai tells, Kari will be willing, but I don't think TK will be all too excited about jumping forward with teh information. I think that's going to be the problem in the end. And that's another thing... maybe I was imagining it, but DarkAngelicmon seemed just as interested in TK as he did in Ken. Maybe I need to go back and reread those chapters to make sure I'm not making this up, but I coulda sworn. And as for DarkAngelicmon's plans... I still think, and I know there's been a little evidence against this (mostly the DD's theories, which is why I'm not as certain that I'm wrong as I should probably be) but I really think that he wants Matty GONE along with his little Digimon Toto--er, I mean, Angelicmon. But I think he wants Mickey and Sam to give their hearts to darkness. And, actually, as we saw... giving one's heart to darkness can make them possibly 'go away' if they fall into the depression. Lots of bad things can happen then. That's depressing to think about. But, yes, that's what I still believe is/was DarkAngelicmon's plans. Maybe they've changed, but I don't think so. Especially not if he's wavering on his belief of what he should do. If he's wavering, he'll probably fallback onto his first plan, because it's like taking a test - the moment you start doubting yourself on an answer, you go with your first choice. It's the safest, and it's what your gut originally told you, so it must be right! Hm, I could talk about DarkAngelicmon for another three paragraphs... but I won't. Matty is starting to get really sensitive with every little thing said. It's a little scary. Ryoko touched on an issue that we all know is true, and that he knows is true, but it's obvious - despite his speeches earlier about faith - that he's starting to lose it. The fact that he's so sensitive about the subject shows that he's not as confident in it as he was before. It's so sad! But it was nice to see him being like, "Mickey! You can still save the world! Go do it!" Except, not quite like that, and it wasn't the world, but it was still sweet. But that just backs up my original theory... he still has faith in Mickey, of course, but it's himself that he's starting to doubt, and that's not good at all. And, I think, he thinks Mickey doesn't believe in him either. However, I don't think that's true. I think a part of Mickey isn't sure what to believe anymore - almost to a fault. He seems so confused recently. Almost all of the questions concerning the darkness and DarkAngelicmon and whether or not the line between good/evil and light/dark is really as certain as we all think it is has been coming from him. It makes me worry about who is going to take advantage of that confusion. And because of that confusion, he's not certain how to even really begin to even broach the subject with his brother, let alone his parents who he KNOWS is still hiding stuff from him and Matty. So, it's a whole big mess, and he's definitely not talking about it. I just hope he doesn't hold it in too long. That could have awful effects. Both of their doubts could. I can't wait to see the talk between Mickey and Sam! That should be... heartbreaking, I envision. Can't wait until you update! |
| Digi-Girl101 2008-09-08 ch 160, | abuseOMG!! LOVE IT!! UPDATE ASAP!! Oh my! I wonder what Sam'll say? Or what's on Miya's mind? |