Hi,

I am an old fan who contacted you every so often, but I haven't written fanfiction for years. I won't be doing this kind of writing any longer.

Well, you told me some things about yourself, and we spoke on and off. Anyway, I was cleaning out some files, and I found a old fanfiction print out with your name in it. This got me wondering as to how everything was for you, family, health, career... It would be cool if we could get in touch.

I don't remember my password for , nor do I remember the password for the old email attached to this site, so if you don't mind us getting back in touch, find me on facebook as DeeDee Bird. Send me a message with a line from one of the emails we sent to eachother outside of fanfiction, or informaion on its content so that I know it's you. I realize this is a bit open. my old email was

I hope you still get these reviews. Be blessed.

Tokia

sad, did Yuya ditch him? hey that reminds me of my dad. WOW

Very nice :) you have lovely writing-nice and 'tight', no wasted words. Very good job at keeping the characters IC but tender.

I almost never review, but the first chapter of your story really impressed me. Cuz, this is exactly the kind of story I've been looking for! :D

You know, where Kyo the smexy asshole gets what he deserves, DUMPED. After all, every woman likes to feel appreciated and cherished every now and then -

I'm probably being picky but this once sentence really stuck out at me...

"The last draw, apparently. Now he thought of that."

Typo I'm sure, also I think it would have sounded better as one sentence instead.

"The last straw apparently, now that he thought of it."

ahahaha but what do I know? I'm not a writer xD

Keep up the good work! -)b

Meh. nice romance though.

Quite impressive my friend. I'm particularly impressed with your descriptive ability and the fact you didn't need to make it quite as 'dirty' as some of the other fanfics I've seen.

Keep up the good work!

Very interesting. I actually think Kyo would act like that too. I can't wait for the end. Keep up the good work!

hey i really liked this story. however i feel that the ending was a bit abrupt. you have accomplished what you wanted in the story but the ending seems to be lacking something. yet all in all. it really was agreat story.

if my boyfriend ever did something like that in an urban situtation i would tell him to go to hell or kick rocks. love the 't stop

yay post a epilogue! it's a good story

aw I liked your story! Too bad it wasn't longer :)

lol. Kyo is so whiped by Yuya ;p Great story! I do hope you do an Epilogue, the style you write is simply amazing. Good luck

it's sweet at the end...aneiko

Born in the shadows of an elder. Living in the shadows of society. Cursed, blessed, to stay in the shadows until Death grants me its solemn release.

*claps* I loved it. i was so relived at the end.

In my opinion, I found that the first chapter effectively kept the individuals and their interactions with one another in-character, but the second deviated a little from what would be expected of the two. I do have to say, though, that this was very well-written, and I enjoyed it. My only complaint would be that I couldn't really picture Kyo (and possibly Yuya, as well) acting anything like he did in the second chapter. Well, perhaps his actions could be accounted for, but I think his dialogue would have been more crude, rude, and straightforward. That's just some constructive criticism, though. Good job! :D