Wow then the ending sucks. Good job. You made a plot, brought in the aspect of Xena, saying their gonna do this. No one ever finds out that he's Ares and yeah. Your such a liar.

You can't end a story that's never even gotten out of the beginning. If this is an okay way to end a story for you then your a moron and you should just stop writing all together because it just leaves the readers ** off and disappointed.

Ops for Cole! Still, it must be unusual to be able to just lie there calmly while someone sticks a sword in your neck, knowing that it can't kill you. Or maybe it has?
Karen :)

This is a very interesting start. I'm curious as to why you stopped. I would love to know why the Gods have choosen to manipulate Cole and the Charmed Ones. It would seem that they would have nothing to fear from the power they possess. Also would like to know which Elder Cole was trying to impress. If the idea was nothing more than the Gods were doing it simply because they can(kind of a we are all Gods joke theme) I would still be interested in knowing why they chose them and where you were headed with this idea. I would hope that you will eventually continue this.

Ooh, just what were those donuts fried in? Another good chapter, building the suspense very well.

Karen :)

Hi. Whilst I'm not that familiar with Xena, I am enjoying your story very much. It's very well written, especially the dialogue. I'm looking forward to reading more. BTW, when I lived in New Zealand, years ago, the producers of Xena once used some of our goats for background shots!
Karen :)

wonderful and interesting start :D you know, I was on MSN chatting with friends and when I saw your post at the board, I copy and pasted the first chapter in the chat and made my friends read it as well, then I gave them the link to the story. hehe :D

I really like this story line. I can't wait to see where you take this. Wonderful work.

Cat

Interesting start, and I like how you're incorporating elements from past seasons so seamlessly. You've done a very good job at combining two shows that, in other hands, would wind up a disaster.

Wow! Good gob. I can't wait for more. Please, update soon.

there should be more llamas in fics. I love llamas!! u are 2 cool 4 words! peace!

this is a good beginning. I would like to see a bit more action though, otherwise very good.