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| raingarcia022 2005-12-06 ch 2,  | abuseReading this was like watching a CSI episode in itself. I liked the Mac/Stella interaction - just as it is on TV, subtle but very, very there. Great job, I loved it as usual. I know that this review took forever, but I really wanted to concentrate on what you have written before anything else. |
| Steeldust-01 2005-11-16 ch 2, | abuseYou're such a great writer ! This story is excellent and I hope we will see more of you. Especially some kind of Mac and Stella stuff. |
| Tink-05 2005-11-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell, it was worth the wait- Such a great ending- Stella's so kick-** when she's angry. My favorite line: The lift was turned on. Stella heard the click and counted the 28 seconds it took for the victim to reach the viewing window. Always 28 seconds. She wondered how many thoughts could run through a person’s mind in 28 seconds, especially those trying to I.D. a victim that the cops were unsuccessful in trying to do. How many prayers could be prayed? How many hopes could be held that it wouldn’t be their son or daughter? That it would be someone other than their wife or husband? She didn’t really know. She didn’t have any family to identify. I hope you continue writing- Hopefully we'll get a new story from you soon. Much Love to you. Congrats on finishing! |
| Christieanne-Anna 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseYou need to update for us. |
| Kurdt 2005-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm liking where this story is going, and I hope you continue with it ... :) It was very well written. Plz update. Thanx |
| mycrazylilstrawberry 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abusehaha. I'm from Tx too so don't worry about it. This is sad...are you gonna continue it? I hope so. I really like your CSI:NY fics so...continue please |
| raingarcia022 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is interesting and I can't hardly wait to see where you're taking this. Post Chapter 2 soon! |
| Tink 2005-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I LOVED the ending- it totally described Mac to a T. Perfect way to end the first chapter and I can't wait for the 2nd. Congrats on another great story. |
| The Madhatter2 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI'm liking this case. I like how Mac appeared at the end and how Stella reads him. Please add more to this soon! I can't wait to see more interaction between the two. :D |
| Aaron Hotchner 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseDon't worry i didn't notice, i'm British and i'm completely clueless to things about America lol. But this was good, i liked it and i think you should continue. |
| delga 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like this so far. Am interested to see where it goes next. |