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| Mae 2005-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou want me to cry dont you? That what amazing. Sad but amazing. |
| Perri Smith 2005-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseDamn. Wow. Spare and tense, but you convey the atmosphere of this grim future really clearly. Poor Rodney, and poor everyone who has to deal with Rodney. Nice use of Carson and Daniel, and Miko just broke my heart. Very, very well done. |