Wat the hell happened 2 chapter 16? it's no longer on the chapters list

Update soon

oh my god! you have to update this fic asap!

i love it!

please please please update

and you know that everyone would love you for it

i shrieked when you put cloud and zidane in,

i love them

you're amazing!

please update xx

i hope that you make the next chapter soon i really love this story it is very addictive once you have read it once awesome story it can't be any better even if you try

i enjoyed the lemon i hope that there will be another one in later chapters I was wondering who was singing that song

I find it quite strange that Seifer is an instructor and squall isn't.

Great story!Write More!PLEASE

December Ninth is my birth day. Heheh.

What? You're kidding me? Email me a link to this bitches profile. I love this story, and ain't no one gonna plagiagize it.

I would also like to congratulate you for capturing the mood I was looking for in a Squinoa story. I've read a lot, and only a few have caught my eye as this one has. As a fellow writer, I know how much it can mean to have someone praise your work, and I hope that my admiration for you work will inspire you to continue with the same vitality as the day you first said "You know what, I like this idea, and I'll write a story about it."

And by the way, because you asked for it...

FUCK YES! DO A SEQUAL!

maybe you report her story idk all i know is great story hope you right more

Hi. I love your story. I don't know what anyone else has said but I would love for you to write a sequel.

great ass story...please write more chapters

There is a story just like yours in the kingdom hearts section just differnt people but everything else is the same the author is AndromedaGalaxy

hi

it was great thx

Heva4goh

omg this is a really good story ik you haven't updated in a long time but if you read this please consider it i love this story and you have really good writting skills and i really want to see what happenes in the end!