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I loved this story. So much. Gah! i think I'm going to keep clicking the favorite button for the next five minutes... or hours...

Aw, that was so sweet! But Kimiko's eyes are blue, not almond brown. Loved it!

CUTE XD

I totally loved this! So cute. :D

i'm pretty sure it's Goo Zombies.

(“So…want to let go of me now and finally play Zombie Goo?” she offered.)

(unless you meant it to be that way)

(then i am sorry for saying something)

aw bles.

DUDE...

WHAT DD THEY DO THAT AFTERNOON...

DUM DUM DUM DUM...

BTW, GOOD STORY...BUT REALLY...WHAT DID THEY DO THAT AFTERNOON...?

I think you coulda added another chappie or two to this one, but i do believe youre onto somethin. :) Bishounen? What does that mean besides hot piece of flesh, anyway? : I know you just had to make that up.

Oh...Mi...God...

I am like, the hugest fan of Kimiko and Raimundo, but I have never really read a Fanfic about them with them being in character, at all... I mean, AT ALL. I don't know how you did it, but you did! And even if I'm being stupid and they weren't in character, (which I highly doubt) that was a great story! I loved it! I would have killed myself If I didn't review. Well, anyways, You're a really good author. Way better than me...

Ciao!

(KimxRai Fan) Sara-chan

good

I loved it! Rai and Kim are my favorite charectors, and I've been waiting for a romantic sceens with the two of them, but haven't seen it yet! Also, it was so realistic. I can really see this happening.

kool. i feel sorry for rai. lolz. if kimiko didnt want him, id have him...if he was real anyway*sigh*. never mind. good work *thimbs up*

...hmm, Sky LionSoul...Squall LeonHart...is it just me or do they sound alike? That was cute! I really enjoyed it!

OMG! update or die!I lov it 3

Sky LionSoul?Reenaeris Artilly?Does Squall Lion/Leonhart and Rinoa heartillyAeris ring a bell? but it is kind of cool to make adaptations of the FF characthers .10 out of 10 for this fic very original in my opinion.