 NeverEndingOblivion 2009-11-26 . chapter 14PURE AWESOMENESS!! NOW THEY MUST GO MAKE HYUUGA BABIES!! :D :D :D :D :D |
 Toph43 2009-11-08 . chapter 14aw! how precious! :) |
 Toph43 2009-11-08 . chapter 3HAHAHA! love the last part! >,< haha |
 Soujou.In.Love 2009-10-24 . chapter 14This story and chapter is funny and good! Especially the part where you showed what TenTen did yo the poor radish... I jus burst out laughing!
There were a few parts where i cried through romantic and sad parts.
Good Luck! |
 Clack 2009-08-03 . chapter 14 enjoyed this story ^^ A little lacking in action but it's still wonderful to read. Th last line is a nice touch.
nejiten forever :P |
 All Blacks 2009-07-21 . chapter 14I guess this is a very late review but unfortunately silly me only found out about this awesome fic yesterday! And once I started reading it (at around 2am - had a bit of insomnia), I couldn't stop until I had read all 14 chapters (I finally went to sleep at around 6am!).
Thank you so much for this wonderful piece of work! This is most definitely the BEST NejiTen fic I have ever read :) Particular bits that had me enamored with this fic include (non-exhaustive list:)):
- The humor you succeeded to instil throughout the story is simply wondrous. The creation of Cookie, her antics and earth shaterring dialogues with poor Neji are just pure genius and had me LMSO (imagine at 3am!)
- You've written the characters in a so 'in-character' way! This renders the story so much more believable. I am really amazed! Really, if Naruto were to continue in the far, far future, I could totally picture your story as a believable continuation! Kudos!
- In Naruto, I am rather a shipper for NaruSaku (and NejiTen of course!) but your story succeeded in making a NaruHina appear wholly believable - one thing which I didn't consider possible! Thanks!
- And I so loved the angst/ romance you weaved for NejiTen! You had my heart pounding and shivering all along for them - which is a feat that very few NejiTen have ever succeeded doing... ^_^
Really, thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this marvellous fic! I have already started reading all your NejiTen fics and will be sure to be on the look out for any new updates from you! Thank you! |
 Sophia 2009-06-24 . chapter 14 Wow!! I really enjoyed reading your fanfic, because there aren't a whole lot of NejiTen fics (good ones at least) out there. Good job on keeping almost everyone in character.
My favorite parts were Neji's interactions with Cookie... there were so hilarious that I really cracked up when reading them. Tenten and Neji make such a cute couple ^_^
Thanks for the wonderful story
~Sophia |
 HeavenlySwirl 2009-06-18 . chapter 14I read this months ago, it was so GOOD! |
 LaLaLand.Citizen 2009-05-21 . chapter 1This first chapter has me hooked!! Even though I have a TON of work, im procrastinating and reading this :)
A VERY good plot.
At first, I thought it was going to be funny, like a lot of the "nanny fics" but wow. this is so...GOOD. |
 Shubhs 2009-05-20 . chapter 14So CUTE!I LOVED THE ENDING!Scratch that I LOVED THE WHOLE STORY!XD XP XD XP |
 Silver Curse 2009-05-15 . chapter 1You should have one of the story's genre's as humor. It made me laugh a lot, expecially in the later chapters |
 taytay233 2009-04-24 . chapter 1this is a awsome story gal ! |
 Under a Rain Cloud 2009-04-21 . chapter 14Wow what a great story, really great job! |
 Mickey no Kimi 2009-04-16 . chapter 2you mean Da Vinci would use the cryptex to pass the message of the 'color coding' to the Priory of Sion members? haha. and i thought their mission was to protect the secrecy of the holy grail! XD wow. i was thinking ten-ten would look...stunning, in a good way. a hot, sexy good way, that would make neji's jaw drop from...amazement. so far, my besties have not failed my when they recommended this story. keep it up! :) |
 grenieee 2009-02-04 . chapter 14Such an adorable story! I love love loved it!
It had my laughing and smiling, thank you |