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gsryen
2007-07-09
ch 11,
abuseUnbelievable! You just made my heart keep on bouncing. So dramatic, romantic! I love it all the way! But I kind of not like about the part where Grissom is asking if Peter kisses her like that and that. ETC> Its just not Grissomish, you know?

But I really like your story, you are a good writer and you make the readers feel that they are part of it. I can feel it in my heart. I love Grissom and Sara. Forever! Keep it up!
oval
2006-12-17
ch 11,
abuseThis was a beautiful story. It was nice to see it from both Sara and Grissom's point of views--made for some good angst too! Great job with this.
lisab1986
2006-07-19
ch 11,
abuseAwesome fic, ladies! I loved this one - I can't believe I somehow hadn't read it yet! It's got angst, and humor, and GSR - what more could I ask for? Great work!
Turtlebaby
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseThis story was wonderful. I appreciate the angst! After WtG aired... -insert sigh- all the angst just got squashed right out of me. Not that I mind...to much. But again you two...Thanks.
ayesha-s
2005-11-04
ch 11,
abusewow..wow.. that was great. hope you write another.
misselise
2005-10-16
ch 11,
abuseomng that was amazing! can i just say that i have 2 authors on my fav list and it's you guys and i found this and i freaked out! I was late to church b/c i read this straight through and i loved it so much! man! i don't even...wow...sheesh...

good job!
nithe
2005-09-27
ch 11,
abuseI totally enjoyed this fic, although I might not have been able to resist having Peter wind up engaged to Sofia. You guys are both great writers, and it's obvious you have fun with eachothers ideas. Please, keep more coming.
Caro
2005-06-19
ch 11, anon.
abusethis is possibly one of my favorite fics. It's the bugs on her wall. They get me everytime.
just me
2005-06-10
ch 11, anon.
abuseHad me scared with this one because I wasn't too sure they would be able to get together after all of their problems. Really enjoy your writing.
Petouille
2005-06-08
ch 3,
abuseOh, my stomach felt weird while reading this one. It was really touching :)
Niebezpiczny Ksiezyc
2005-06-06
ch 11,
abuseVery cute fic! As always a pleasure to read! Please keep writing!
DolphinAnimagus
2005-06-01
ch 11,
abuseAw, it's over . . . but what a happy, fluffy ending! I've enjoyed both of your stories and I'm looking forward to reading more of your "combined" stories. Let your break feed your muses, CSINut214 :)
Teenwitch
2005-06-01
ch 11,
abuseGreat job, guys, really. You should work together more often, twice the good work! Nice fluffy ending, just made me all gooey inside. :)
reuq
2005-06-01
ch 11, anon.
abuseah. it's sad when these come to an end. but this definintly did make me feel happy. thank's for the feeling!
CarbyluvYTDAW
2005-06-01
ch 11,
abuseIt's over! But I just started reading it a week ago! And here I was complaining about WIP. Excellent job you two. I love reading stuff by both of you and together is phenomenol too. Can't wait to read the next story you two work on. (>-)

Oh, and BTW, favorite lines:
He’d joked the night before about wanting to love her all the way to the end of the earth, but couldn’t since he was a scientist and the earth was round.
She’d promised to flatten it for him if he just kept that promise, pressed him onto his back and proceeded to smooth the globe into a perfectly flat plain.
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