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Reviews For: Ripped and Torn - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

Amaya-hime
2006-07-26
ch 12,
abuseit's been so long since u've updated! do u plan on updating soon or should i give up my hopes on having a wonderful story to read?
aquakyuubi
2006-06-20
ch 12,
abusehey i love the story and character u added I think that one day u will be a great author and be rich
Anasazi Darkmoon
2006-04-04
ch 12,
abuseAs you already know, I'm stuck at the library, and I couldn't take the time to do more than skim through the chapter, but I liked what I saw. I'll try to read it a little more thoroughly next time, I promise! ^_^
ilse
2006-03-07
ch 6, anon.
abuseplease please please continue
anbu713
2006-01-06
ch 2,
abuseok, well i'm getting a little tired, so i'm gonna stop here. great work so far man, and i'm gonna keep this short since i'll probably reveiw like every two chapters or whenever i stop reading for the day... and i hope you get the chance to read some of my story again! might give you some inspiriation, tho you seem to have fights down pretty damn well...
freakofnature07
2005-12-21
ch 1,
abusehi andy !!hah she got hit by a car!
Reyavie
2005-11-07
ch 12,
abuseFINALLY! This thing is letting me review. Stupid thing that didn't let me do that Friday *kicks, stabs and maims it* Anyways your Mika demon really freaked me out. The thing was supposed to be an unsent and not a freaking monster that CAN'T be killed. Sheesh! But that unknown woman was there just in time. I want that spear! *scowls*

Just when something seems to be going slightly better you just send another problem. Seymour WASN'T enough?! You had to send a another killer after her? She doesn't have a target on her back, the poor character.

Anyways torture apart I loved the chapter, still think your action scenes are the best and that I should really learn to do those and that you better keep this going. *grins and waves*

See ya soon, Reyavie (*shrugs* as if you didn't know)
KivaEmber
2005-11-06
ch 1,
abuseWhoa! My name is Lauren Also. Creepy. Anywho, a pretty good intro to the story.
Da KeR MysTeRr
2005-11-04
ch 12,
abuseANDY-DREW! -GLOMPS- whats doin?!

Great Chapter!! Only took me like what, two hours to read it? lol that's ok. AWESOME pretty much sums it up. And as you already know I'm totally jealous of your writing skills, and yepp.. lol okies well im off to work on my own ficc, so toodles! -hugs tightly-
Auron's Fan
2005-11-03
ch 12,
abuse*nods* i must say, that this chappie was worth the wait. descriptive battle, very nice...muwahahahahahaha! *grins* hope you have the time to update soon!
*hugs tightly*
from, Brie
ps. YOU GET NO STARBURSTS! HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Da KeR MysTeRr
2005-10-11
ch 10,
abuseyou know what Andy? I really think you should update sometime soon, it might be ncie before i completely forget what the story was bout n have to REREAD IT! a nd chapter 9 was long -whines- alone with chapters 1-11... -whines again- so yeah update soon 'kay? -hugs tightly- yea.. and don't forget my word is law, and i saw UPDATE! Or I'm just gonna spread my wings and float above your head and poke you whahahah! yes! lol =]
llehotogdaersihtnacuoyif
2005-09-09
ch 11, anon.
abuseHola! Don't mind my name. It's "If you can read this, you can go to Hell." It's one of my favorite quotes. But anyway, interesting fic. It's been a long time... Continue as soon as you can, okay?

James
Reyavie
2005-09-05
ch 11,
abuseHey there! I finally finished reading your story and I'll have to say that you're doing a great job. The plot underneath the original one, the connections with your original character and most expecially the action scenes are really good. A different approach to this kind of fic but one that I'm enjoying to read. Keep going alright?

See ya, Autumn's Day
trogdorxxx
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abusegreat opening as soon as these 3 days are up im gonna start
Flamin' Hot Babi Gurl
2005-08-27
ch 11, anon.
abuseI have high hopes for this story. I really hope you continue this fiction soon. It is defidently going into my favorites list in my IE...

Babi Gurl
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