 Crimson Tears 2006-06-29 . chapter 1Wow- that was really good. kudos! |
 Morbid Cheshire 2005-12-30 . chapter 1Wow. This was AWESOME! A wonderful look into Angela's past, I really enjoyed it. You did very well at conveying her emotions and thoughts, it was very good. ^^ -faves-
--Morbid Cheshire |
 Gaia Faye 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Out of curiosity, did you get the 'squish' thing from the musical Chicago?
Anyway, I'm pretty sure this is actually the first Angela fic I've read. I'm glad it's a good one. I thought it was an excellent touch that the stabbing paralleled rape. Just revenge. |
 E.P.O 2005-05-07 . chapter 1Brilliant way to capture Angela's past. I especially liked the two contrasting flashbacks while she was stabbing him. *applauds* |
 AnarchicQ 2005-05-07 . chapter 1*Does the dance of 'first reviewer'.
Ahh, Angela. My darling Angela. It's so hard to find credible fics of her pre-Silent Hill life.
This is good. I honestly was not expecting it to be. I was expecting another dolldrum fic where Angela snaps for no real reason. But no, this time Tommy snapped for no real reason.
I like the no-questions-asked autonomy of Angela obeying her father, and that scene you inserted about the photo and the happy memory it brought.
And the title made it that much more disturbing. |