oh. oh that is horrible. poor Arty. :( sad story. good writing though. could have been longer, but still. Badly wonderful.

its sad but totally true. you have actually given a real synopsis on the life of a schizophrenic from both points of view. however, it does not portray the real a.f. as he would control and conceal his emotions way too well. but you also portray him in a way as he may have well just convinced himself knowing his determined, demented and stubborn personality. You also get an insight on butler whose character is well displayed as he would have remained loyal to Artemis no matter what

aw this is so sad :(:(:(

Weird. That's all I can say. Innovative though.

wa wa wa wa wa wa!

hey what the heck is this it sucks ur an idiot dont ever rite anmore crap like this again got it

Whoa. That was cool. I love this sort of thing...except that it does nothing to help with my paranoia XP.

NO! YOU SHALL BE DESTROYED. YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO ARTEMIS. HE CAN'T BE CRAZY!NO!

Rather sad, in a way...though it does make you think. Heehee, i should be there too...myself being crazy...though luckily not in the way in your story! Oh yeah...can you continue it?! Please?!?!

0oh! Good twist! I like it!

That is a very interesting concept, and in a way, it kinda messes with your mind. It really makes you think, I mean like, what if Harry Potter wasnt really a wizard, and it was just a figment of a crazed mind? Same for Arty? I liked it! A very well thought out and original story, (though short)!

Well, hello, there... I see you got inspired by the new Artemis Fowl book. Seana, as you can probably guess, cannot stop talking about it. Literally. When I see her, the first word that pops out of her mouth is Artemis. It's kinda funny actually. Anyway, this is an interesting concept. Dark, screws with your head, but you know, those are my favorite kind of ficcies. : P. Good luck with the writing and don't you dare stop!

That's horrible! Poor Arty is in one of those insane asylums...wait till SakuraLuna reads this, she's going to come after you with a chain saw!

VERY short one-shot. Although good. I have the Opal Deception! Very good book.

No offence, but no one liked your story. :(

Holy...this was sad. Boo hoo. IF HE'S CRAZY THAN SO AM I!WAH! ARTEMIS I'M BUSTING YOU OUT!