Very well done Rel, possibly a bit wordy on some of the description but still very articulate. I liked it, I thought it was gunna be about Sirus for a second...but Ron. Hmm very good

aw! I hate angst but this is soo good! I was in such suspense of what was going on to make him sad. It could have been something about sirius but then everybody does that one. Trust you to be original!

bon travail!

san

wow i was not expecting that ending at all...very well done, well written, excellent idea.