No! *kicks Team Rocket*

That explains why in the old games everyone carried whips... :( The Cool Trainers, Tamers, and Sabrina did, too :(

Poor Surreal...and poor Slayer, too :(

*kicks Team Rocket again*

Thats the reason why I hate team rocket!

Pretty damn good if you ask me. Nice description and you really tied into the emotions-- smacked THAT nail right on the head. I need a tissue, and I'm not being sarcastic or anything. The only thing I had a problem with was that the Rocket battled her instead of just whipping out a gun and pulling the trigger, but that would kill the point of the story and you made up for it by killing the Espeon anyway. I can't wait to see that journey fic you mentioned. If it's anything like this, it ought to be good!

Oh and kudos to another intelligent guy who's on the other half of the globe... Bleah, there's goes my feminist side again. ;)Anyway, hope to see more soon! Happy holidays!

-TA

Saw the link to your profile on TPTF and decided to check it out. Must say there is nothing wrong with the story grammar or spelling wise. At least nothing I could find.

I think this story clearly shows Team Rocket isn't just a bunch of incompetent morons and is certainly dangerous and should be taken seriously. Truth is they do use and abuse and sometimes even kill pokémon.

This story does show how I picture Team Rocket as the orginization, but it kind of leaves me in the dark as to what the setting is here. All it shows is the battle, but where is it held? I can hardly imagine them fighting in a black void. There have to be surroundings. Other than that, this is a good story. I'm looking forward to more work from you!

WeirdDutchGuy

::sniffles::

What does it mean? I have absolutely no idea, I just got an idea, wrote down and got this. I was never any good at the mataphorical stuff. Anyway, I'm glad people like it, though I didn't think it was as good as it could have been.

a true talented tragity. But what does it mean?

Oh...That was so sad...I'm not really sure who to feel sorry for, Surreal, or Slayer... ;_; Maybe both of them...
till, it was well-written, and touching. ^_^ Keep it up.