kinda fluff but cute. the writing isnt as bad as you say it is. if you had any opinions about luke and lorelai's marriage or rory and logans relationship you could add those and build a story off that? just a suggestion. good writing

aw...this is so sweet. i think u should keep going. have another chapter with a little more fluff and then more on to something big, maybe. just an idea!

update soon plz

Great, please update

It was really good. But in the last chapter, you switch from 1st person (Lorelai's POV) to 3rd person. I am not an editor, it was just kind of confusing.

Aw! OMG! It's so romantic. I loved it! Write more please