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| O_O 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseJoo ebil skank, joo killed Sessho D: But yer stories are good :] I call everyone a skank-y |
| CSFA 2007-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseso sad... but I can't believe that Sesshoumaru would die fighting a dragon or be surpassed by Inuyasha. All the same, this was a great sad story. |
| Neko-chan 2006-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseMew, its so sad, but beautifully wriiten. |
| Melitot 2005-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseGosh, no... I swear I'm not gonna reread it *anguished cry* and not because it's badly written or what -- far from that! But I think you've understood. I really admire your writing style, as well as your characterisation of our beloved heroes: if only you didn't choose so many death-plots ;_; Anyway, keep on writing, and compliments. Ps: sorry if I made any mistake; english is not my mothertongue ;-) |
| Fialka 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was...something. A ** sychological twist indeed. The fact that Sesshoumaru would die first NEVER ever occurred to me before, seriously. It's usually Rin who dies in many fanfictions. Now, Jaken - while I hate him for his voice (in anime), had me taken away, and I felt really sympathetic with him. At some point, I even felt more sorry for him that for Rin...now that's strange. The pat on the head was justified, and I believed Sesshoumaru WOULD do such a thing. Overall, I like the story because of its orginal idea. Keep those coming, would ya? |
| vimpire-dogdemongirl89 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseCries,Sess is dead and poor Rin and Jaken Still crying |
| heka 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusemua ahahahah good story yay! so sad sesshy died :'( |
| Hayal Nazim 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseIt was good, and I didn't find it to be rough. You know, I don't really like Jaken, but in this FF I feel sorry for the both of them. Sesshomaru was all that they had and now he's gone... "With time memories fade. With love they last forever." |
| ManonLeChat 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. Have you seen Alfred Hitchcock's movie "Psycho", where the lead character gets unexpectedly killed half-way through the story? Your fic hit me rather like that. I had no idea as I began with Rin and Jaken at the campfire that their real situation would turn out to be so lonely or grave. Bravo for actually killing off (temporarily or not) Sesshoumaru! ^_^ (Seriously, in a lot of fics Rin dies [or re-dies] and gets revived [again] but it's refreshingly rare to see Sesshoumaru the one in trouble). Also, you write a good Aun. The dragon is real presence and came across as a believable animal that snorts, growls and needs to fed just as much as Rin or Jaken. Good start to a story -- will there be further chapters? |
| TheEvilAshleyness 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseseriously deppressing |
| an innocent reviewer 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseOh...my...God. This is BEAUTIFUL! I love it so much, PLEASE update soon! I swear this is the best that I've read in weeks. |