Hold up!What the hell happened to Serena!?

update or die!?!?!? sorry, when i read a good fic i get a lot aggressive! i'm usually an a/o fan but is has intrigued me, great job!

At least she's back.

For the love of god please update this!

great job! please continue

Great story, I don't think I've ever seen a Serena/Olivia fic before. I wonder why they broke up?

very worth continuing. Are they going to get back together?

Great story...I really feel for both women. A few grimatical mistakes and words left out, but those can be fixed by double checking and/or ppossibly having a beta. And if you want a beta, I'll be happy to volunteer.

'so what ya say, worth continuing' Hell yes!

I think you've got Serena's family situation down pretty well. I'd like to know what happened between Serena & Olivia in the past. I'd also like to know what happened to put her into the hospital. Dark hair? I don't think so. I'd bet money that Elisabeth Rohm is a natural blonde.

Good depth of emotion in this chapter, but it loses some of its force because we know from the prologue that Serena lives. But it's still an excellent story about a character I loved.

Seems like a good start. Would like to read more.

I'm intrigued. I've always loved Serena (in large part because I loved Kate Lockley, ER's last alter ego). I'd like to know what happened to her. I'd hate to think of her suffering.

Oh, how sad. Poor Serena, I hope Olivia will help her through it...