this was good! i congratulate you on a story well done! lol jk but really it was good and i loved it! keep writing

Love it! Perfect little story!

Love it. Made me chuckle a few times. Great story. Thank you for sharing it.

Lovely story, really. I can't believe I didn't read this sooner.

This was a great quick read. I like anything that makes me smile. Great first story.

great story. I wish there was another chap or a continuation. ;)

Not bad for your first try at writing. I love marriage law stories.

I so did not realise this was Hermione/Snape. I figured the trio. Warning would've been nice, if not in the summary then at the beginning. So not my cup.
Good writing though. I have to check if you already have something little closer to my liking. :)

This was a wonderful story. I thank you so much for having shared it with us. ~S~

That was cool. I liked it. Nice short story based on the MLC, which is very unusual. My only question is what Caramia means. Bravo.

{giggle} Oh, this was *so* nicely done. Congratulations on a job well done. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

Aww, how fluffy just like I like it! Excellent story and I love that it doesn't follow the same story line that half of these Marriage Law fics do.

This is a wonderful story, I was surprised by the turn of events, and the reaction of Hermione's parents. I would have thought they'd try to hear what she and the professor had to say. Having said that, IT was a great chapter. I loved Severus' reaction!:-D
Wow Greece, I often read that he had foreign blood in these FF, but few people actually give him a background.
I totally love the last chapter, Great end! "...no intentions of carrying those out, as I have no wish to sleep on the sofa." what a great line.

I LOVED IT!hehe so cute!

Now that *points to you story* is the right way to do a marriage story. Very inventive and thoroughly enjoyable - in a word - Brilliant.