the fics are mostly amazing, but i think it looses something when you try to explain with the Author's notes. ~shrugs~

Very interesting. I like Sakura's view best, because it's so naive.

stupid sakura. really, she's the one who doesn't get it, isn't she? of course. there's more to living than finding a random boy to date kid; figure it out before you do get yourself killed and have nothing but your fantasies. it's amusing how she thinks sasuke or itachi would ever WANT to date her.

i liked this chappie better without your author's note at the end. it seemed a bit contradictory, or simplified? anyway, it's also nice thinking their's an intimacy between them in their destruction.

poor itachi; just a kid himself molded and forced into this. he needs a freakin' mentor or something.

You're quite good I must admit...
I couldn't tell any teensy bit of OOC in Naruto
(Thought don't take it the wrong way Flereous, I'm probably just too stupid to see it)
I think you've got the exact out look on Itachi-kun and Sasuke-teme.
You should write a book and have it published.

~NekoNaru

yay, i really like the chapters so far. my favorite of the newer ones i've read is naruto's chapter about sasuke-kun. you did a fantastic job on portraying his feelings for his friend/rival and how he feels about itachi. its my favorite because i really get to see how defensive the brothers are of each other and how naruto does care for sasuke-kun and how sasuke-kun actually wants/needs naruto as a friend. it really is a wonderful chapter and i wouldn't mind if those 3 characters were explored more together, mayhaps in a sequel of some sort? i must admit that the sakura chapter scared me but i did like the last line, it was funny. good job with the fic!!

these were so good and written like, professionally. EVERYONE was in charactor, not hint of OOC whatsoever cept Naruto a little tiny whiney...TINY WHINEY bit. amazing work, and you should continue, because I'd like to know what else the naruto charactors think ^^

I actually find the idea of Itachi/Sakura interesting, since Part II at least. At first I was like, "that totally came out of nowhere", which was true, at the time of the first ItaSaku fandom they didn't even know about each other and it usually was stupid. Now though, they have the common point of Sasuke, definitely, something that was already there, was Sakura's intellect and being a genjutsu type. With canon current timeline, I can't see them in love, especially because of Naruto that Sakura cares for and Itachi sees as a thing, but in another universe? Yeah, they could at least, most likely be, friends.

Woo, I really don't know about Naruto at all, since he's not one of the characters I get, but while I can't tell if he's IC or not, Naruto doesn't seem OOC, and this is AU and when they were younger after all.

Uh oh, this isn't going to still end up in a massacre I hope?

Ah, AU, some things got a little better, some things got a little worse, if Kakashi left Anbu he would have Asuma as somewhat of a drinking buddy maybe, and where is Gai?

I do see Kakashi and Itachi as having some things in common, went down very different path because of those little bumps, a kind teacher, a teammate that gave his life, otherwise, boy genius, boy killer that Kakashi was, he would have turned out even more like Itachi.

Iruka! He's the Super Ninja Teacher! Great Teacher Iruka!

I really love the way this is going so far, I was worry about yet another lame "magic-make-it-better" AU, but this makes sense.

//just so he’d feel a little lonelier, a little safer//

Poor Itachi. I think emotions is something that has to be developed. There are some there since birth, but without the proper environment they are stunted to almost nothing, such as for the child soldiers, and then when it comes back again, children who finally have a chance to grow feel scared and maybe guilty.

Wow, a happier Naruto AU I really like. I could see this, Itachi being LESS screw up if the parents had been killed earlier, and he had been left alone with Sasuke, his one redeeming point in the flashback, no matter the distance, because Sasuke, if not his parents, loved him unconditionally.

I think this is a interesting story u came up with.lol
I hoping u continue writing about itachi.
Well have a nice day
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