Short, sharp, sweet. This is good! I like how it's not all-angst, but is realistic. Sanzo's part in this is great. From fics I've read he's either out-of-character or there for nothing with his attitude, but you handled his character so well! Love this! Good work and thanks!

Yes, Hakkai. A name which my past couldn't inhabit, my sadness couldn't drown, my anger couldn't destroy.

A name that wouldn't fade away in the falling rain.

Made me smile, that. :) Well done pal. Such beautiful language was truly inspired. ^^

Aw...this was really a sweet fic. I think you captured Hakkai's feelings towards Kannan, Gonou, and his 3 companions beautifully. I truly believe that this is the way he would percieve these things. You're a really great writer, and I hope to read more of your things in the future.