 Burning In The Dark 12/13/09 . chapter 13 loved it |
 lonelyassassin 12/20/08 . chapter 1 *speechless*
That was beautiful. |
 Destination-Zero 11/19/07 . chapter 1Beautifully written. The style that you used in this tory reminds me of an author I read back in high school.
great oneshot. |
 Masamune's Song 12/22/06 . chapter 1Hey, wow I like it. Hints at some spiritual connection between the two- their opposing strengths. Excellent, as ever! |
 Fluoxetine 6/3/06 . chapter 1Very nice; I love the beautiful phrasing. Though when I first read it, I thought the narrator was Aeris. Oops. |
 Nando the RPS King 9/23/05 . chapter 1Interesting. Very deep and well written. |
 Lady Sanzennine 9/21/05 . chapter 1Damn, but that was good. I spent the entire fic trying to figure out who was speaking. At first I assumed Cloud, and pretty much continued to assume him even though it didn't quite fit. Clone 1 indeed. Awesome idea. The writing here is impeccable and the sexual imagery brilliant. Awesome fic Ardwynna. |
 Hipathya 7/9/05 . chapter 1Clone No. 1? Who the hell is that? I thought Clone No. 1 was Sephiroth, so the narrator can't be talking about himself...ohh wait! He is! Brilliant! I think that's it isin't it? This fanfic seems like it's sexual but it's not...it's a Sephiroth internal battle? |
 randomreview 6/16/05 . chapter 1 hey! that was good. kinda short though.. lol |
 ShadowBeaw 5/11/05 . chapter 1Very well written and I truly loved it. It was just worded beautifully and I give you my praise for it. :3 *gives nummy candies and cookdies* |
 Yusagi 5/9/05 . chapter 1Who is Clone no. 1?
I thought it might be Aeris, but hm...
UNtil I know, I can't really judge it, can I? |
 BloodRaevynn 5/9/05 . chapter 1M, good writing; can't wait to see more of your work.
I can't believe people had to be outright _told_ who the characters were though! I figured it out between the fourth- and third-to-last paragraphs! Ah well, I watch so much anime I guess I'm just more used to picking up subtleties.
Matao,
BloodRaevynn |
 Literary Eagle 5/8/05 . chapter 1Wow, that was both creepy and beautiful at the same time. Awesome work! |
 Taney 5/8/05 . chapter 1Awesome, just awesome. You write first person very well. - |
 Sorehai 5/8/05 . chapter 1That was so...beautiful. I was taken in by the entire story. It was so detailed and emotional. I sense a hint of darkness in it as well. This was really written well. I would like to see more of this writing. Particularly another chapter from this fiction. May I just say, if you do add another chapter, wil you reveal the two characters? I have a feeling one of them is Sephiroth. I think this because the description of one of them fit him perfectly. I have a guess to who the other one is but I won't say. Excellent job. This immedialty caught my attention. Bravo. |