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lonelyassassin
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
*speechless*

That was beautiful.
Destination-Zero
2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. The style that you used in this tory reminds me of an author I read back in high school.

great oneshot.
Masamune'sSong
2006-12-22 . chapter 1
Hey, wow I like it. Hints at some spiritual connection between the two-- their opposing strengths. Excellent, as ever!
Wish-full Thinker
2006-06-03 . chapter 1
Very nice; I love the beautiful phrasing. Though when I first read it, I thought the narrator was Aeris. Oops.
Nando the RPS King
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
Interesting. Very deep and well written.
Lady Sanzennine
2005-09-21 . chapter 1
Damn, but that was good. I spent the entire fic trying to figure out who was speaking. At first I assumed Cloud, and pretty much continued to assume him even though it didn't quite fit. Clone 1 indeed. Awesome idea. The writing here is impeccable and the sexual imagery brilliant. Awesome fic Ardwynna.
Hipathya
2005-07-09 . chapter 1
Clone No. 1? Who the hell is that? I thought Clone No. 1 was Sephiroth, so the narrator can't be talking about himself...ohh wait! He is! Brilliant! I think that's it isin't it? This fanfic seems like it's sexual but it's not...it's a Sephiroth internal battle?
randomreview
2005-06-16 . chapter 1
hey! that was good. kinda short though.. lol
ShadowBeaw
2005-05-11 . chapter 1
Very well written and I truly loved it. It was just worded beautifully and I give you my praise for it. :3 *gives nummy candies and cookdies*
Yusagi
2005-05-09 . chapter 1
Who is Clone no. 1?

I thought it might be Aeris, but hm...

UNtil I know, I can't really judge it, can I?
BloodRaevynn
2005-05-09 . chapter 1
M, good writing; can't wait to see more of your work.

I can't believe people had to be outright _told_ who the characters were though! I figured it out between the fourth- and third-to-last paragraphs! Ah well, I watch so much anime I guess I'm just more used to picking up subtleties.

Matao,
BloodRaevynn
Literary Eagle
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
Wow, that was both creepy and beautiful at the same time. Awesome work!
Taney
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
Awesome, just awesome. You write first person very well. ^-^
Sorehai
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
That was so...beautiful. I was taken in by the entire story. It was so detailed and emotional. I sense a hint of darkness in it as well. This was really written well. I would like to see more of this writing. Particularly another chapter from this fiction. May I just say, if you do add another chapter, wil you reveal the two characters? I have a feeling one of them is Sephiroth. I think this because the description of one of them fit him perfectly. I have a guess to who the other one is but I won't say. Excellent job. This immedialty caught my attention. Bravo.
Gen Masho Rajura
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
About all I can say is...breathtaking.
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