OMG! I totally LOVE this series! =D (My favorite OC is definitly Dakari.) Could you update? Please? Pretty please? I am literally willing to beg, PLEASE update! *puppy eyes* To the favs! =D

OMFG! o0
U HAVENT UPDATE SINCE LAST YEAR! D<
OMFG OMFG OMFG U BETTER UPDATE SOON CUZ I NEED 2 NO WUT HAPPENS 2 RAPH! DX
So...UPDATE NOW OR ILL SEND A HUGE MOB ATFER U!>(
Plz & thx ;D

WOW OO
THIS IS SO AWSOME...
...but I g2g B4 my mom kills me... *shifty eyes*

Please updae really soon I you're loyal fan beg of you!

It only took me *checks watch* I dunno, a really long time, but I'm reading it! Woohoo! OK, first things first. Your writing is definitely as good as your art (and, since I hadn't reviewed TM, this goes for that too). On another note, in order to wax a bowstring (and I know this from experience) it's very helpful for the string to be on the bow, or at least stretched tight. By the way that part was written, it sounded like it wasn't; just a random little thing. Unfortunately, it's 9:08 now and I have to scurry off and finish some homework, so I'll read the next chapter tomorrow. Again, good job!

All to Jesus,
Seth Greenwood

Well what can i say that i have not already said...um...nope cant think of anything except to point out the fact that i loved it and that i want you to get the next chapter up as fast as you can

I apsolutly Love it! This is just one of those stories that i cant put down. There is one thing that i want to ask you... How do you get to the place where you posted the pictures?

I apsolutly L.O.V.E. LOVE it almost as much as i loved your first story. Im looking forward to reading the rest and if you get a chance give me a e-mail at
I would love to hear from you.

*rushes in to submit a very late review* Oh my GOSH! I'm so sorry! I haven't been a very good reviewer have I? Moving right along, Saesha is going to be okay right? RIGHT? And what about Rjinn? He's going to get captured isn't he?! Well at least Mikey and his crew is safe. For the time being... Anywho, why do I get the feeling things are going to be extremely bad before they get better? And just what on earth is going on with Kiyo? I know he's being experimented on but there's gotta be more to it than just that. Anyway, great job! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Well Raph was champing at the bit to get some action, now that he got it, on the other end so to speak, he's not happy. Goes to show there is no pleasing him.

Mind broken oh my that doesn't sound very fun, no I think i could pass on having such an event happen to me.

Loved Mike's part at the end sort of lightened things up a bit even if there was talk of being eaten, fried. and so on.

Hope the writer's block clears up so you can write faster.

Writer's Block can be a pain. Would you believe I'm STILL stuck on the romantic action/adventure story I'm trying to write? And it's been like months since I even looked at that particular story? I have 7 chapters but after that I have no clue on where to go from there. As for you missy, I enjoyed this chapter. The song at the end made me giggle. If I were Iwansi I'd be laughing too. And the parts with Kiyo were just heartbreaking. We saw glimpses of their past and then that jerk Xephantes (or whatever the shell it is) needs a serious beating! A VERY SLOW AND PAINFUL BEATING! And poor Rainbou. What did she ever do to deserve such a cruel fate? I mean honestly it's not her fault she's a dragon. And the little boy Jehk (is that right?), he's so cute! Him and Palesi are adorable! And I loved the bits with Mikey! "I'm your beat down instructor. No, no, you're doing it wrong. Booga. Booga." Gotta love me some Mikey! As for you ma'am, you need to update soon! Please! ^_^

I didn't think the ending was lame Luna.

Loved the little flashback scene you opened this chapter with. Baby dragons so cute!
But then for it to lead to poor Kiyo who Xetyphaes is torturing and lord knows what else for his preverse pleasure is enough to make me rip snorting mad. Gr!

Seems Leo has some connection to what is going on with Kiyo at the present moment. That might come in handy, but it seems they can't use it to help Kiyo yet.

Then Mike playing with the kids and offering "Bob" for a name. What is wrong with Earth names? i know probably not very suiting but still.

Loved that song like Iwsani I found myself laughing over it.
Talk about running us through the different emotions.

*Cautiously pokes her head through the door* I know I'm kinda late, please don't kill me, ok?

LOL! Whole conversation with that guard is great!! LOL! 'Nighty night Grammar Nightmare' clever!

Aw, They're so cute when they're all sleeping.

The bit with not understanding why the water blurred Tahkar's vision is cute.

“Unorthodox and downright rude!” Yes, maybe, but it was also quite an effective wake up call.

hehe, Raph's going with Don, which means we got more happy Don and Raph interaction which we all know causes melting into happy puddles.

Aw, Leo's waving goodbye with his tail too! Isn't that cute?! *huggles Leo* But they're separating so soon after reuniting! *sniffles*

Cheers,
~pacphys~

hi! i'm starting to catch up! yay! great job . . . and like i already told you, nice LONG chapters.

kiko is out!